Very vivid, graceful write...I love the title of this poem...
Amazing fluidity...wistful yet little glimpses of subtle passion
Weaved throughout your imagery. I enjoyed the use of
The different colored text regarding the words piano and painted.
Marvellous write, thank you for sharing! :))
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Thank you for your Kind and Humble review and comment. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred p.. read moreThank you for your Kind and Humble review and comment. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet
Thank you for your kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am a bit of a Hopeless Romantic s.. read moreThank you for your kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am a bit of a Hopeless Romantic so this was more so on love than anything but was fiction I love writing about things like that and I love pianos the piano is what inspired this piece. Blessings. Benita
10 Years Ago
I'm a hopeless romantic too... Most women are. :) you do the romantic poetry beautifully,
Sultry seduction in colorful lines of love and lace.
Wandering words of wonder and wistfulness in wanting wisps of waiting
Beautiful piece I must say.
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Thank you for your kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am a bit of a Hopeless Romantic s.. read moreThank you for your kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am a bit of a Hopeless Romantic so this was more so on love than anything but was fiction I love writing about things like that and I love pianos the piano is what inspired this piece. Blessings. Benita
I write a lot of different genres of poetry and I can appreciate a lot of different styles. Your lov.. read moreI write a lot of different genres of poetry and I can appreciate a lot of different styles. Your love of pianos speaks volumes to a poet. For music inspires so many to write what is often only felt an encouraged by the heart.
10 Years Ago
I have written lot of different poems also I just am not good at Japanese haikus, Sonnets things lik.. read moreI have written lot of different poems also I just am not good at Japanese haikus, Sonnets things like that and I don't do Rhyme I do free verse but what ever inspires me I write I've done ones on autumn my favorite time the year one of them I hope to read more of your work. I agree the Piano is one of my favorite instruments it does tend to pull at my heart strings many can see a instrument in many different ways and detentions in it's Beauty and gracefulness.
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While I cannot play an instrument I can play words as if they are. And I can band on the drum all da.. read moreWhile I cannot play an instrument I can play words as if they are. And I can band on the drum all day. Oh and I can sing. So I guess I can play my voice.
I like how you wrote "Piano" and "Paint," so beautiful.
I do adore that picture of the piano, make me think of an artist with a piano, who gets paint on it from his fingers every time he goes to play.
This is a lovely write, well played. ^^
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I am glad that you Enjoyed. thank you for the kind review and comment. yes it does I think it was a.. read more I am glad that you Enjoyed. thank you for the kind review and comment. yes it does I think it was a artsy type photo fund it on Printest. I appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet
10 Years Ago
The photo really inspired me, I'm writing a story/poem based off of it though I'm afraid it's too ch.. read moreThe photo really inspired me, I'm writing a story/poem based off of it though I'm afraid it's too chaotic to understand unless I explain it. xD I'll post it one of these days and see.
You're welcome. ^^
Elegant, sensual and marvelous piece of art, simply feel like falling in love with the writer. Now imagine how strongly you have writen:)
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That is my Hopeless Romantic coming out I am in love with love I can't help but Pen it down but I am.. read moreThat is my Hopeless Romantic coming out I am in love with love I can't help but Pen it down but I am Happy that you Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your kind review and comment. I really appreciate it. I am glad you liked it. Blessings. kindred poet
Very vivid, graceful write...I love the title of this poem...
Amazing fluidity...wistful yet little glimpses of subtle passion
Weaved throughout your imagery. I enjoyed the use of
The different colored text regarding the words piano and painted.
Marvellous write, thank you for sharing! :))
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your Kind and Humble review and comment. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred p.. read moreThank you for your Kind and Humble review and comment. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet
Seems to glide through more like a song...as you read about the lines of this work...I would say that is how you wanted it to come about...
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10 Years Ago
well yes Sort of seems lot or my poems come out like songs and sometimes I don't know until some tel.. read morewell yes Sort of seems lot or my poems come out like songs and sometimes I don't know until some tells me :) Thank you for your kind review and comment. I appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet
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