Kiss the raindrops

this was written before I ever listened to Kiss the Rain - Yiruma but I've used the YouTube video before. was written may 14,2014 11;34pm

  Kiss the falling

raindrops.

breathe the breath

of life into me.

Your holy word

is weaved into the

seams of my heart,

May dancing hours

are crystal rain showers

swaying flowers.

Do you hear the

roaring dandelions

dancing upon

the fires of

the morning sunrise.

Kiss the falling

raindrops,

And weave your

web of life

into me LORD.

Author's Note

this was written before I ever listened to Kiss the Rain - Yiruma

but I've used this YouTube video before. was written may 14,2014 11;34pm


Yiruma music it is like listening to heaven so beautiful.

Most of the work I write is free verse and I do short stories love poems and
poems about god and fictional love what ever comes to me I don't do Rhyme unless
that's how it sounds as I mostly do free verse as when it comes it comes like a flowing river and I have to write it down or it will be gone and some times I have ideas sitting in my mind and don't lose them it is weird and then I end up putting them to paper and god does the Creating amazing isn't it.


Kiss the Rain - Yiruma

Reviews

[Bluefire]

This is truly lovely, and very appropriate for the weather over here.
You have a way of seeing things that others would find gloomy and turning them into something beautiful, just like the rain.
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I love the rain even if I want to go out and can't because of It raining I play in it aspire in it Get Inspired by it's beauty and wonder. Rain and storms never seem depressing to me they are beautiful strangely to me they Fascinate me really LOL... I learned not to fear them and my mother she is like sunshine or a sun flower always positive person :) Thank you for your kind review and comment. I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

I think you take after your mother kindly. ^^
In the day, I think they're depressing but at night it reminds me of Spirited Away, and the sound of the rain when that dirty water spirit was walking through the streets of the other world. =3
You're welcome, any time. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Well any time it is beautiful to me but yes it does make you think of spirited away at night very neat. :)