Take me in give this love a chance

Take me in give this love a chance

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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written may 18,2014 Inspired by god always but Inspired by the video Demi Lovato Give you Heart a Break.

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Shh... Listen I'm

not going any where,



Slow down Baby  take

my hand I am here.


Kissing you is like

a million stars are

dancing in the skies,


I fear nothing

trust me I am different.


Lets take the world

in our hands boy there

is so much we can see.


Boy you need to

rest let me take

away your pain.


Take a chance I

can see you're in love

with me but you

said you'd never fall.



But if you fall boy
I will catch you and

I promise my love your

Heart is safe with me.



Breathe slow down

Boy  take me in

give this love a chance.  

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
New hope you like. written May 18,2014 Inspired by god always

but Inspired by the video Demi Lovato Give you Heart a Break.


Demi Lovato Give you Heart a Break (official Video)

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Love this poem (and the song!). I think you should enter it into this contest!

Link to the contest:
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/what-is-love%3F/49973/

I thought this poem was prefect for it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Funny you say that I actually did before you had even read this poem I am Glad you liked it. thank .. read more
Emily

10 Years Ago

Haha! Your welcome!
Kindredpoet, your words have the intensity of a passionate embrace....beautiful write....as always, you have a beautiful way with words....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Why :) thank you for your kind words. I am glad you like it blessings. kindred poet
Good music and beautiful poetry for love. I like the energy and the repetition in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words I am really Happy that you Enjoyed this piece . Blessings. Kindred P.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.

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Added on May 19, 2014
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