Gods The pen and my MuSe

Inspired by I feel morally god and also by the poem I Don't Need to be Hurt to Be a Writer by Lonely Scorpio Girl. http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/gadismelayu/1354281/ Written May 8,2014

God is my inspiration that feeds

the flow in me,

So the LORD keeps this flow

of inspiration going.

I know he could take it

away just in a snap of

his fingers just as he could

my life.

God is my muse God is

the pen.

The master that guides

his work of art.

He strums the strings

upon my heart,

And paints the imagination

in my childlike spirit.

God is the pen I am the

paper he creates upon.

Copyright  Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell  McCartney

Author's Note

The photo isn't mine.

Inspired by I feel morally god and also by the poem I Don't Need to be Hurt to Be a Writer
by Lonely Scorpio Girl.
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/gadismelayu/1354281/

Written May 8,2014



Ahbabena Ya Ain - Youssef Boutros - Violin/Easy Listening

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is good to have a clear head and know what is true. I like the energy and belief in the poem. Some of us can't see the light even when it is right in the front of us.
"God is the pen I am the
paper he creates upon. "
Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my Poet friend.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you :) you're very right my friend. Glad you Enjoyed reading I really appreciate it. blessings. kindred poet

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for entering this poem in my little competition.
Please understand that I cannot comment now as this would be unfair to other entries.
I shall return after the contest ends.
Very best regards.
Clive.

[Bluefire]

"He strums the strings
upon my heart,
And paints the imagination
in my childlike spirit.
God is the pen I am the
paper he creates upon."
~*~
Oh, so pretty. I can tell this came from our Lord. You and He make a great team.
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it :) blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

No problem! ^^

[Aethereal]

Our pen is just the mood that we happen to be in at the moment of creation. Any mood that's complex enough may be called a God mood. Synergies, such as moods are greater than the sum of their parts. Without moods we wouldn’t be conscious. Consciousness itself is a God mood. God isn’t conscious , but Consciousness is God. Consciousness worships itself. Consciousness is us. Moods-R-us, and we like it that way.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

did you Just write a poem or is that a review ?? well any creativity or Inspiration is God and Goes to Jesus. But thank you for the Comment and checking out my write. Blessings. kindred poet

[Aethereal]

The Jesus mood is a complex God mood. Prometheus was a complex God mood for the ancient Greeks. Jesus and Prometheus have much in common. Every culture throughout human history has had the same archetype. Human beings love their archetypal visions , innate ancestral patterns within the human psyche. Archetypes are extremely important subjects of Psychology. Archetypes are mood candy, and species survival traits. You need them to be truly happy, to be truly conscious. Enjoy your version.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Guess for me all I need is god and my family to be happy. But then I am happy even when I am Sad that's what's so amazing about Jesus he gives me that :) hope you have a blessed day my friend and thank you for your lovely review

[Aethereal]

Yes, the God mood does that for human beings. It always has. Let it be your mantra. Let it bring you tranquility. In this way you’ll be conscious of your Consciousness. I wish that everyone would get in touch with themselves in this way, and not be so distracted by all those bad things that may cause them psychological harm. “Above all else know your self“. Socrates. Feel the power of introspection!

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

Yay, I am being mentioned! Haha :D

I love the lines: "God is the pen I am the paper he creates upon." and "The master that guides his work of art". We create so many wonders and beauty, and also pain and damage, but we tend to forget who gave us the opportunity to express all those that we created. This is very beautifully written! ^_^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you :) you're very right my friend. and you're welcome. Glad you Enjoyed reading this. blessings. kindred poet