Devil dressed to kill

Devil dressed to kill

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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inspired by reading the poem Fable love by: Coyote Poetry http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Castellenas/1342663/

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Goddess so breathtakingly

beautiful Devil with a dress

to kill on.



They call her the heart

breaker young carefree,


Want's to  be free knows

nothing about real love

and doesn't care who

she  hurts along the way.


Eye's of fire an alluring

Goddess praying on the

one's that fall to her beauty.


Goddess is a sister to

the Devil so don't let

that name trick you.


She's the Devil with

eye's  of fire praying

on your flesh and sin's,


Play's you like a puppet

then leaves you.



She is a tempting

beauty she will rip

your heart out and

stomp on it and smash

it until it hurt's and breaks.


The longing and yearning

she leads you on then say's

I am finished 

I never wanted you.


Devil dressed to kill

Goddess so breathtakingly

beautiful.


It was the devil

tempting you,

the Goddess is the Devil.



Once we give into temptation

the devil comes in and has us

in his hooks.


She's the Devil dressed to kill

she will eat your heart  and gives

it back.


Young and carefree knows

not of real love.

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
inspired by reading the poem Fable love by: Coyote Poetry

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Castellenas/1342663/

Written April 15,2014 Tuesday

The Anime photo isn't mine but I hope it
fits the poem and I don't draw anime either.

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Enchanting.
It reminds me of a quote I saw once. About Satan. I forget how it goes. :/
Thanks for sharing this dark read. ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

thank you for reading I am glad that you Enjoyed reading. I appreciate it. Blessings. Kindred poet <.. read more
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. ^^
"Young and carefree knows
not of real love."
Foolish emotions of youth. Can't stop the wind and can't stop a woman in the hunt. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome thank you for reading I am glad that you Enjoyed reading. I appreciate it. Bless.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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