Hypnotizing  shore

Hypnotizing shore

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
"

pull between love and innocents...

"

Shh...  baby listen to

the slow lullaby.



Watch the hypnotizing

shore of crashing waves.


The golden sunset seems

to always paint a beautiful

horizon  deep in her eye's.


There is a fire that

never die's in her.


playing in the fallen

past why can't we go

back in time.


We are going to make

this real  it won't be

a dream anymore.



My mind still dances

with the fireflies,


I am still pure at heart.


Take my hand come

with me  my love.


Leave all the stress

and extra baggage behind.


Paint this sunset upon

your smiles,


Let's play with the fireflies

in the meadow's.


Please tell me there will

be happy smiles.


Watching the hypnotizing

shore of  crashing waves.  

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
Ocean love and innocents.. I love the water It's so magical.

written March 25,2014



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A beautiful poem for the sea and love. Your good description took me to the sea and the possibilities of love. Would be nice if we could be innocent for a longer time. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you I am glad it painted a beautiful picture that's what I hope for when I am writing because .. read more



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This a beautiful poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate it. I am glad you Enjoyed it blessings
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome
Your title captured my attention, your beautiful words captivated me throughout. You painted a beautiful picture of the ocean and the innocence of love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate it. I am glad you Enjoyed it blessings
A beautiful poem for the sea and love. Your good description took me to the sea and the possibilities of love. Would be nice if we could be innocent for a longer time. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you I am glad it painted a beautiful picture that's what I hope for when I am writing because .. read more

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Added on March 25, 2014
Last Updated on March 31, 2014
Tags: Love, innocents, free verse

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