Caterpillars into Butterflies of life

We are Caterpillars into Butterflies.

            As the little thinkers

       of the world,

     We as children

     were the Caterpillars

     growing and learning

     in the  world.

      We're  the little

       Caterpillars.

     When we start

     to grow up  it's

      as if we are on

     top of the world,

     Soaring like the

     wings of an Eagle.

    So we as the little

    Caterpillar thinkers

    of the world,

    When we are not

    Caterpillars any

    more we will

    shine and blossom....

    As the beautiful

    bright colors of

     the butterfly.

      

   When we reach

    adulthood we

    will come out

   of our Cocoon,

 

    And blossom

    into a butterfly.

Author's Note

I was thinking of how children grow and bloom it was also for a young friend on here I don't remember her name but she was a very Talented writer much of her work inspired me. This was written June 25th,2010 I am very in touch with my innocent childlikeness in me I have a huge Imagination this is why I work With children and young Adults in our Boy scout Troop I can understand them at their level what do you think.

Reviews

[Kieta!]

This is so cool and so beautiful!!!! I like this a lot!!!!! :) Great job! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Your comments and review is appreciated I am pleased that you enjoyed this write it this was inspired
by how we as children grow up and it can be seen this way it is quite a beautiful sight to see.
Blessings. Hope your week is a blessed one. Benita

[NeiL ArandA]

Glad you penned something really inspiring associating growing kids with a caterpillar. Its amazing to see them transform into a person we always wanted them to be... Some suggestion below .

When we start
to grow up it's ( as )
if we are on
top of the world,

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind words. I have it written well on paper just miss the typos on here at times thank you for that. blessings. kindred poet