The Kings gallows

The Kings gallows

A Poem by Gideon X. A. Elson
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When know you do the man who wrongly condemns you to death, and with your last words call down calamity upon them.

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As he approach the gallows steps,
Mortality he now accepts,
The priest hath given his last rites,
And come his death the king delights,
Within his heart he knows the truth,
Yet still remains his manner couth,
Two evil deeds hath transpired,
As one man now has been mired,
A man killed his body did burn,
And now this man takes blame in turn,
He knows the king behind this act,
His wicked will doth he exact,
Except to damn he has no power,
And curse he does the king this hour,

"O STATELY ONE WHO SITS ABOVE,
But not the king I speak thereof,
Call down a higher power I,
And plead torment you by and by,
My hopes that God becomes your bane,
And with his scourge drives you insane,
For call down a higher power I,
And plead torment you by and by"

And with these words the king stood up,
Then with words his own raised his cup,

"O lowly one who waits below,
Tis only this I wish you know,
For of your death I care the least,
I think on fowl tonight I'll feast"

And with callous swung his hand,
And bid to action the hangman,
With mighty effort did he yank,
A damned man's body then was sank.

Gideon X. A. Elson


© 2022 Gideon X. A. Elson


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I love the old world charm this is worded with.
Excellent ending never underestimate the blood of the innocent. It will cry out from the grave.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gideon X. A. Elson

2 Years Ago

Thank you for another kind review. I'm gonna have to visit you again soon!
My hopes that God becomes your bane,
And with his scourge drives you insane,

I am not sure what bane means, but i enjoyed this

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gideon X. A. Elson

2 Years Ago

Bane used here I mean "a cause of great stress or annoyance"
Kim S.

2 Years Ago

oh okay, cool i love learning new words...
So many believe "Karma" has a way of returning to those with "ill will" that many often hesitate to curse those that willfully harm them or others. It may be true, but ...so many mean-spirited people get immense satisfaction in their deeds and so few of them pay any price along their "ways".... just because they "CAN".

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gideon X. A. Elson

2 Years Ago

Yes in writing this I envisioned a man, who at first keeps his composure. Then upon his final chance.. read more
I loved this poem. I was well written and read easily conveying an emotion and thought that I believe most people have had. A feeling of powerlessness in a situation beyond your control. Great work

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gideon X. A. Elson

2 Years Ago

Thank you, only my second time conveying actual dialouge so that is appreciated
The wealthy and powerful never spare a thought to those they wrongfully destroy.
It is likewise said that only the good die Young.
Reads like a passage from some novel or Shakespearian tale. You write so well.
I could read your work for hours.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gideon X. A. Elson

2 Years Ago

Now if only I had hours worth of work to read haha. But at this rate it won't be long all of my post.. read more
M. J. Smith

2 Years Ago

You'll know when quality tapers. You won't be satisfied u til you get it right. Poets are also Craft.. read more

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Added on January 12, 2022
Last Updated on January 12, 2022
Tags: King, prisoner, sentence, gallows, execution, curse

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Gideon X. A. Elson
Gideon X. A. Elson

Keytesville, MO



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I'm nobody important, but I do find life more bearable when I create things be it writing poetry, music, photography or rambling nonsense. I like to write in rhyme and meter, though must admit emphasi.. more..

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