Underlord vol 1. The Collar and the Sword - WIP
A Book by Gideon T Roos
 CHAPTER 1 COMPLETE -
Underlord is a fanfiction of the Japanese Light Novel series, Overlord. The story begins two weeks after the events depicted in Volume 9 of Overlord.  © 2015 Gideon T Roos
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This is still a work in progress, and subject to revision and change.
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Hello, Gideon!
I love the whole approach of a newcomer from another world embarks on an adventure in the Overlord universe! So storywise I'm very eager to read the upcoming chapters.
The only critic I can give would be the extensive use of commas, making the reading session feel a bit clunky at times.
Otherwise a great read for any Overlord-fan! 8/10
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
I will take a look at the comma usage, however it is - to my knowledge - all linguistically required.. read moreI will take a look at the comma usage, however it is - to my knowledge - all linguistically required and correct, which means that in order to reduce it, would require an extensive rethink of the typical sentence structure used.
Thank you for your input.
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Hello, Gideon!
I love the whole approach of a newcomer from another world embarks on an adventure in the Overlord universe! So storywise I'm very eager to read the upcoming chapters.
The only critic I can give would be the extensive use of commas, making the reading session feel a bit clunky at times.
Otherwise a great read for any Overlord-fan! 8/10
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
I will take a look at the comma usage, however it is - to my knowledge - all linguistically required.. read moreI will take a look at the comma usage, however it is - to my knowledge - all linguistically required and correct, which means that in order to reduce it, would require an extensive rethink of the typical sentence structure used.
Thank you for your input.
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Added on November 16, 2015
Last Updated on November 25, 2015
Tags: Overlord, Fanfiction, Horror, Intrigue, Mystery, Gideon, Roos, Underlord, Novella
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Gideon T RoosPotchefstroom, Northwest, South Africa
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A simple Fanfiction writer and fiction/romance author. My style tends to be one focused on the details of human experience, exploring situations and morality, in essence, the human condition.
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