Away

Away

A Poem by Loki the Shadow
"

imagine a journey taking place in your heart

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Away, away, away I'll go

across the land

through rain and snow

 

Away, away, away I'll fly

spread these wings

and soar so high

 

Away, away, away I'll be

become something special

just wait and see

 

Away, away, away I'll go

so far away....

so far away....

© 2010 Loki the Shadow


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I think that the word "become" doesn't sound right, but I love the entire poem. It flowed very well and I loved the message.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Away, away, away I'll fly
spread these wings
and soar so high

I loved these words here. Quite the inspiarational write in these words of hopefulness. Very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 17, 2010
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Loki the Shadow
Loki the Shadow

Pensacola, FL



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Im a clown in many ways the mask i wear is the one you see everyday. i write to express myself because i dont like to talk about emotion more..

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