The rain

The rain

A Poem by Loki the Shadow

It would seem to me that life is like the rain.
hard or soft short or long every drop is full of pain.
you see it before happens but still are unprepared.
you know the storm is coming but pretend it isnt there.
life is like the rain my friend i tell you what i know.
That while each drop is full of pain. you can sometimes find a 'bow.

© 2010 Loki the Shadow


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I like the way you start off sounding defeated and then smoothly transition into hope. I can get a lot of meaning out of these few lines! Well done!

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Loki the Shadow
Loki the Shadow

Pensacola, FL



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Im a clown in many ways the mask i wear is the one you see everyday. i write to express myself because i dont like to talk about emotion more..

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