Lost Dreamer

for Michael P.

     Just too many dreams

for any man's heart to hold.

     Despite the striving,

dreams too often unfulfilled.

Now, he's another lost soul.

Reviews

[Karina Longo]

Very few words, lots of emotion. That's so deep. And as Craig mentioned, the title really catched my eye too. I really like it.

[An owl on the moon]

The title caught my attention and the words struck too close to home. How you speak into the hearts of those who long to dream, but feel they have simply dreamed too long... Painful and profound...