Ironic

A Poem by Geralyn Miller

WOTD #58

Came to steal her heart,

but she absconded with his;

Guess the joke's on him!

© 2010 Geralyn Miller

Author's Note

Senryu Slayers

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OR	I love your style so far Good job Peace Posted 13 Years Ago I love your style so far Good job Peace Rating /100

luciddreamer

Clever...love it :)
Peace
Robin

Posted 13 Years Ago

Liza	he came to steal her heart - by giving his once left out in the open - she stole it... the joke's on him lol good one Posted 13 Years Ago he came to steal her heart - by giving his once left out in the open - she stole it... the joke's on him lol good one Rating /100

NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..

oh I adore this one!!~ clever turnabout!~

Posted 13 Years Ago

YouoweYoupay

True! And the opposite can be just as ironic. Human beings are such complex creatures.

Posted 13 Years Ago

the butt of this joke
is living without his heart
beating in her hand

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on November 23, 2010
Last Updated on November 23, 2010

Author

Geralyn Miller

Phoenix, AZ

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I was born in the year of the Dragon, and am prone to roaring for amusement's sake. I have been writing poetry since I was eight. That's right, fifty years of poetry, all written in longhand. In ad.. more..