Cool Fool

Cool Fool

A Poem by Geralyn Miller
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WOTD #56

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       His sardonic sneer

twists his handsome face to hard,

        trying to be cool.

© 2010 Geralyn Miller


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Geralyn Miller
Senryu Slayers

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You've been so picky with the words even on the title
I love that
Peace

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the word choice and rhythm- great image for a senyru. Great job!

-Coral-

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one...reminds me of a "cool fool" I know.
Peace
Robin

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a silly fool
thinking he's remotely cool
with that string of drool

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on November 23, 2010
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Geralyn Miller
Geralyn Miller

Phoenix, AZ



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