Survival

WOTD #36

        To eke out a life

from the rough and meager scraps

         granted to a soul.

Author's Note

First try at senryu, not sure about it????

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

wow this one really grabbed my attention....great job :)
Peace
Robin

[David W Moore III]

fantastic for first or hundredth try!

you did a great job
eking out a senryu
about survival

bravo! ;)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

depth in echoes~ reverberating~ this is not only excellent but a mediatative piece to be sure!~