Private Nightmare

A thousand wishes

and a prayer of dreams,

while the angels watch

we dance.

 

Dance in the night

and the halls of slumber,

cheek to cheek,

heart to heart;

swaying to the angel song.

 

Dance until the daylight calls;

then awakening . . .

 

alone.

 

 

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

It's pure ans sweet to read. I love the you way you control the words. The deep meaning in your short poem is powerful and outstanding.
I love it

[zdzd]

I love your use of semi colons, those are not as common in a poem.
A very good short yet meaning full poem.