Pretty Story

It would be so easy

to fall for a

               gentle embrace,

               gentle look,

               gentle kiss.

So easy

to love a

               soft caress,

               soft word,

               soft promise.

So easy

to believe a

                pretty face,

                pretty story,

                pretty lie.

But, then

it would be so hard.

Reviews

[sarah]

I like the form this is in

[An owl on the moon]

I really liked the dancing form, and I think it honestly helped hide the mystery until the very end.. There is so much that could make life appear easier.. yet in the end it would leave us empty and void. Brilliant flow with a powerful message.