The Silent Musician

Written in about 10 mins. I would like to make a screenplay out of it. Unsure whether to go with the approach that this is just one person being all these things, or a different person for every line

I am a silent musician.

I am a guitarist in a queue.

I am a drummer in the library.

I am a rapper on the bus.

I am a choir in a church.

I am a piano on a first date.

I am a trombone in an argument.

I am a harpist at a wedding.

I am a violin at a funeral.

And I am a triangle at home.

Author's Note

What do you think of the imagery? (If you think there is any?)

Reviews

[Horizons]

Lol... It's a funny write but in a very Inventive way. I love your Imaginary admittedly. As you mentioned you want writing a screenplay on it then go on, it's really a great Imaginary as well as an interesting to read so, if you make your screenplay then hope you'll let me know because i really'd love reading your screenplay if that one be based on this the same theme. It's you know a great and an awesome theme, i enjoyed reading this and your made me smiley today. Thanks for sharing your write here with us, hope you'll share some your more nice stuffs and of course y'll make your screenplay very soon, all the best for your screenplay, hope you're on now on that... Well done for this poem. Beautiful work!

[Gilda]

Thank you! I think I'll definitely make the screenplay :)

[Woody]

I find the idea of a silent musician oddly funny.
I like the idea and the layout. nice one.

[WithLoveandLoss.]

I adored this, especially your purpose with the last line (Oh, do I know the feeling) Keep it up, this is excellent and very enticing writing. I look forward to your next work!

[emmajoy]

Can see a darkened stage.. scattered hints of ten pairs of white toe-tips, a spotlight that slowly and palely travels as if searching - then grows each time it arrives at a pair of toes. At the end, a blue light shines on the backs of three people saying that final line. Maybe. Each of your phrases suggests a real life, conjurs a real tableau with a sense of place. Wonderful!

'I am a drummer in the library.' - can you imagine the reaction to that! :)

[The Butterfly Writer]

There is a little imagery. It's oddly thought-provoking, although music can also be viewed as organized silence. John Cage's 4' 33''.