2000 years

2000 years

A Poem by Georgie Mac
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Kaleidoscopic rain

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Two thousand years - worth flailing tinsel.

Electric lips breathe tandem hollers.

Pitch to pitch, paper rips and strips.

As kaleidoscopic rain we fall.

 

Connotations proceed you my dear quarter.

 

Fleeting sense - kindle for thunder.

Congealing sandman brushed into oblivion.

Reclining ember burns to the base of his tongue

Gracing time triumphant - ushering in new suns.

 

Dear sweet quarter - teem the era anew. 

© 2011 Georgie Mac


Author's Note

Georgie Mac
Please take from this what you will, Id be interested as to what people think it's about?

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Honestly I was always terrible at trying to figure out what a poem's about haha. But it does give me the feeling of new year or a chinese dragon eating fine chocolate while speaking to his pupil.
Excellent work
I hope to see more!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ok, ...I think it is about Christmas, and all the commercial perversion of it.
The "Congealing sandman" is Christ
The "Reclining ember" is his words, that arent remembered after the "holliday"
Am I close, do I get a cigar?

I enjoyed the feeling of intensity in this poem..even if I didn't get it right.
ice

Posted 13 Years Ago


Actually, this reminds me of a VERY BAD TRIP I once had, and said trip was not in any wheeled vechicle, it took place while I was seated on a rock on a mountainside.
Your poem makes me think of confetti and a parade at the end of the world.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it's about time passing and our future? Very mysterious in any case :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it! unique style :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 12, 2011
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Tags: 2000, two thousand, quarter, years, earth, time

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Georgie Mac
Georgie Mac

Portsmouth, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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