Texture

Texture

A Poem by Georgiana S

The dawn has this texture
Of long endured pains
With perfume of silent dusks.

For how long will the wind venture
Between long forgotten remains,
With scent of violent dusks?

The rain has this arenaceous texture
When there aren't any eyes to cry,
The silence is a mild creature,
A friend if needed, but still a lie...

And the shadow blinded my senses.
My feelings on Procust's bed
My mind destroying fences
Of the uncouncious, of the dead.

The pain within me tear apart
The innocence and my heart
Into millions of serpents
Devouring each other,
Creating Chaos -

And many other
Molecules of poison
Are released in the air,
Despite my crying and despair...

Have you tasted?
My weakness have this texture
Of salty vapors in the sky,
Or a peace of the black eye.

...and a perfume of a departed soul -
Somewhere, far from human senses.  

© 2012 Georgiana S


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"Into millions of serpents devouring each other, Creating Chaos -" this was beautifully presented and well thought of. I like the word choice.

I liked it so much I read it again, "The silence is a mild creature,
A friend if needed, but still a lie..." I wish I could think of such an effortless way to describe the depth of silence and its haunting guise. Great write


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Into millions of serpents devouring each other, Creating Chaos -" this was beautifully presented and well thought of. I like the word choice.

I liked it so much I read it again, "The silence is a mild creature,
A friend if needed, but still a lie..." I wish I could think of such an effortless way to describe the depth of silence and its haunting guise. Great write


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad and hauntingly beautiful. A wonder to think about the texture of one's weaknesses. Brilliant write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a Soul song drifting along the edge of existence , an awareness of the intangible , that thing we call 'more' , your heart expressing every texture .

So good to see you expressing again .

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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