Texture
A Poem by
Georgiana S
The dawn has this texture Of long endured pains With perfume of silent dusks. For how long will the wind venture Between long forgotten remains, With scent of violent dusks? The rain has this arenaceous texture When there aren't any eyes to cry, The silence is a mild creature, A friend if needed, but still a lie... And the shadow blinded my senses. My feelings on Procust's bed My mind destroying fences Of the uncouncious, of the dead. The pain within me tear apart The innocence and my heart Into millions of serpents Devouring each other, Creating Chaos - And many other Molecules of poison Are released in the air, Despite my crying and despair... Have you tasted? My weakness have this texture Of salty vapors in the sky, Or a peace of the black eye. ...and a perfume of a departed soul - Somewhere, far from human senses.
© 2012 Georgiana S
Featured Review
"Into millions of serpents devouring each other, Creating Chaos -" this was beautifully presented and well thought of. I like the word choice.
I liked it so much I read it again, "The silence is a mild creature,
A friend if needed, but still a lie..." I wish I could think of such an effortless way to describe the depth of silence and its haunting guise. Great write
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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"Into millions of serpents devouring each other, Creating Chaos -" this was beautifully presented and well thought of. I like the word choice.
I liked it so much I read it again, "The silence is a mild creature,
A friend if needed, but still a lie..." I wish I could think of such an effortless way to describe the depth of silence and its haunting guise. Great write
Posted 11 Years Ago
"Into millions of serpents devouring each other, Creating Chaos -" this was beautifully presented and well thought of. I like the word choice.
I liked it so much I read it again, "The silence is a mild creature,
A friend if needed, but still a lie..." I wish I could think of such an effortless way to describe the depth of silence and its haunting guise. Great write
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
sad and hauntingly beautiful. A wonder to think about the texture of one's weaknesses. Brilliant write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
sad and hauntingly beautiful. A wonder to think about the texture of one's weaknesses. Brilliant write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
a Soul song drifting along the edge of existence , an awareness of the intangible , that thing we call 'more' , your heart expressing every texture .
So good to see you expressing again .
Posted 12 Years Ago
a Soul song drifting along the edge of existence , an awareness of the intangible , that thing we call 'more' , your heart expressing every texture .
So good to see you expressing again .
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 17, 2012
Last Updated on December 18, 2012
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