Bingo

Poem I write about someone I really adore

Love me please, ifs it's the last thing you do

Please fill this hole within me, you're all that I consume

I floss you out of my teeth; plotting. You're the next meal I'll eat

You're my prey and I'm in primal position

Awaiting for the time of us to form a collision

I shall capture you until you realize us being together is the only decision

My veins run dry and my teeth can't resist, the sweet smell of your blood hints that you insist 

Your red could cause the mountains the turn blue

Your red belongs to me no longer you

Your red hints at a citrus flavor, what a taste so true

Your sweater is no longer able to keep you warm, as you are colder than ever predicted

My love! What have I done to you, when I have I become so wicked?

My Love! Forgive me as I got too carried away

Forgive me as there aren't enough words in our language to express how I feel

And I thought I show you in some other way

My love I apologize as I got too excited

The townsmen now hunt me with pitchforks and my fate is decided

They chant and they chant!

"You may not live a life, no you can't! no you can't!"

We have limited time together

 I know you'll never awake but,

I wrote you this letter:

I would crawl a million miles just to get a glimpse of you 

You're the center light of my life, you'll always be my moon

The chants become louder and fate tells me I'll see you real soon

You're the reason I live

You're all that I consume

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

I used to think it was the person, but it's actually the emotion inside yourself that you are in love with

Love isn't so rare when you know what you are looking to fall in love with. But it does kind of cheapen it a little when you realize this... that special someone doesn't really exist, but they are also everywhere if you know how to look.

Also, you might be giving yourself a personality disorder. Which is, not a good time. Most of the time. But, you're still young, try not to do that to yourself. Everyone eventually develops their own version of one anyway, avoid it while you still can. It won't be long. (everyone is pretty crazy out here, even the normal people)

[June bug]

Your red could cause the mountains the turn blue
Your red belongs to me no longer you
Your red hints at a citrus flavor, what a taste so true

I love this part, and the part of the pitchforks,
This is very creative and so well expressed. Enjoyed this

[Georgia Ivy]

Thank You!