Hawkeye

 Soar of brevity,

talon clasped into a

fallen ecstasy.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A nice one and soaring...:)

[Imara]

I love it all up until the last line. If I follow you're describing the flight of the hawk and his hunk correct? Maybe falling instead of fallen. Overall great job!

[Todd Mc' Callough]

Thank you very much Imara for reading this. I will consider your cretique

[Sigmund Eeley]

I like the first two lines, but i feel ecstasy doesn't quite fit. Perhaps "fallen integrity"?

[Todd Mc' Callough]

I like your idea, but I was going for more about a birds flight, rather than anything intellectual, if that's what your pointing out. Thank You though.