Tomorrow

Tomorrow

A Poem by Miiki

What will happen tomorrow?
Will tomorrow be normal?
Will I go to school tomorrow?
Will I fall in love tomorrow?
Or will I die tomorrow?
Yesterday was a part of the past
Yesterday wasn't anything special
Yesterday was just another day in my life
Yesterday, I should've done something better with my life
Today, all I did was schoolwork
Today I didn't go outside
Today I wish I did more
Today I want a break
Today I began to wonder...
What will happen tomorrow?

© 2012 Miiki


Author's Note

Miiki
My thoughts about what could happen in the future and if I'm actually living my life to the fullest. Enjoy :)

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this was very cool, the way your formatted it, the way the words are colored, and just the poem in general.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Miiki

12 Years Ago

Thanks!
RachelReaper

12 Years Ago

welcome :)
I like the repetition here. It's incredibly effective. You have used what everyone thinks and placed it in a poem. Everyone really is wondering... what will happen tomorrow? WHAT?



Posted 12 Years Ago


Miiki

12 Years Ago

Haha, thank you!
always remember: the point of power is in the moment, and only there! The past is a major hallucination, and the future is a surprise. Nice poem. I like the "naturalness" of your poem, not trying to be anyone else but you. keep up the good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Miiki

12 Years Ago

Thanks! I appreciate your thoughts :D
This was a good poem. That's how I think because I never have anything to do. It's really sad when I feel like I don't have a life, but at least I know sometimes I'm able too. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Miiki

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I totally agree with you.
My days are spent tomarow. This is a good poem, I like it alot. Nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Miiki

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on October 19, 2012
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Miiki

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