Love

I could feel the love
The sparks as they flew
As I looked into your eyes
I could see the depth of you
And I take your hand
To guide you through
This beginning time
When we are new
A pressure on my lips
I know you feel it too
It's the start of the finish
Oh what will we do?

Reviews

[ElizaB]

Thank you for entering my competition.

I really liked this! It is short and sweet and you also stuck to my prompt (which not many entrees did this week, so thank you for that!).

It reminds me of new love and all those first times you share with somebody. It took me back to y youth and my first love...

Thank you again for sharing :)

[Geodan]

Thank you so much!!