Dear John

Dear John

I packed your things today. They will be at the side door that you first walked through when you met my parents. I felt torn about giving you the boardwalk photos, when we first kissed, but I figured you paid for them, so you should have them. The one thing that I kept was a picture of your kids by the lake on the 4^th of July�"when Johnny had sunburn real bad. It reminded me of when they asked if we were getting married�"and you said “maybe.”

I will miss them terribly.

 

Yours,

Genevive

 

 

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Poor John. Might sound cruel, but I actually laughed as I read this. Old John certainly got crossed out, didn't he :)

[Forest Green]

Heartrending...your letter is concise and final, illustrating the strength of broken cords.

I think everyone has written something like this at some point in time, which makes it truly universal.

Daniel

[Chris]

Some "moments" are more ...real, than others. A lot of impact within a small appearing piece.

I like this letter, this beautiful write. Why? because it's just that divine, and nothing more than that, what was needed to say. Pure life, and things that happen. Honestly amazing. I find this inspiring. Maybe I should write one day, a letter or a page out of my diary.... Thank you.

[Bridger Hall]

Danng. Rough story.. but you turned it into a beautiful piece. thanks for sharing a part of your life.. and if it isn´t part... good work with your creativeness. :) bye

[J. J. Nightingale]

wow .. I feel as if I am reading a very personal message .. I can feel you pain and your Love, all at once .. .. Hope the intended recipient knows how hurt you really are ..

Take Care .. Jazzy

[I Shred This Cabbage]

Very affecting. Full of loss and regret, striving for acceptance. These wounds will not heal, while love informs them. Strong write.