Missing You

All the little, yet, significant parts

that make the whole of you,

are held in my aching heart

until I see you next.

I will wait a lifetime,

so long as you promise

to come back to me.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Your prose is simplistic in its extreme, and because of that it's beautifully skilled

[Chris]

I won't say a word to this one... too many hold that promise.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

Aw, shucks. You know he will come back to you....

[Brianna Woodward]

i loved the simplicity and conciseness of it

[Jay Levon]

The movement and sweetness shine here, well done

[WiLL i e]

Love the selflessness. The giving of all for the asking of just one thing

[Revery]

wow, incredibly passionate and sweet. Many envy those that have one that will love them like this. Your have a dedicated passionate heart. So beautiful.

[symmetryAsymmetry]

Ooh! Good stuff...GOOD stuff!! :-)

This is melting my heart, I feel the longing, and need to a lost love... good stuff!

[I Shred This Cabbage]

very sweet little poem. it is full of longing, i fear is destined to go on. well done!