Gurney DriveA Story by GenXerI wrote this for a "City Smells" competition. It was also an excellent way of preserving my memories of Gurney Drive in Georgetown, Penang, Malaysia.A small boy skips down Families and tourists crowd the pink paved sidewalk that runs
along the coastline. A strong odor rides on the wind that is blowing across the
adjacent muddy beach. The sulfurous stench grows stronger as the tide retreats. The boy suddenly stops on the sidewalk, and then turns all
the way around. His eyebrows twist into a frown and he pushes his lower lip out
in a pout. Just a moment ago, he was walking with his mother, father, and
sister, and now they have disappeared. He looks at the narrow street where cars sit bumper to
bumper, clouding the air with smelly bluish fumes that make his nose and eyes
sting. Clusters of people pass closely on both sides of the boy, and he smells
perfume and aftershave, and the occasional whiff of body odor, a reminder of
the day's intense, dripping heat. The child starts walking again, heading north with the sea
to his right. He passes the giant The boy starts to run. He weaves among all the walkers'
legs; bare legs and trouser legs, pale legs and tanned legs. Then he darts
between two parked cars and crosses the road, his heel just barely escaping the
front tire of an approaching scooter. The food court immediately charges all of his senses. Bold
red paper lanterns dance in the frisky breeze over dozens of eating families.
People stroll and browse the food carts, talking and laughing. Giant woks sizzle and spit, sending out fragrant garlicky
clouds. Sweet-smelling banana pancakes bake in cast iron pans. Rows of flat
dried squid that smell of the sea hang on strings, flapping and spinning in the
wind. The boy stands at the edge of the old crumbling pavement,
looking for his mother. His eyes roam the food court for several seconds, and
then his face begins to crumple. "Kuan-yin!" a female voice cries.
"Kuan-yin!" Kuan-yin turns and sees his mother hurrying toward him. His
smiling father and sister wait near a char kway teow stall. Kuan-yin happily
meets his mother's arms, his beaming face outshining the moon's. © 2010 GenXer |
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