Make it last

Make it last

A Poem by GemmaMarieLeask

I'm done hiding my pain with a smile

I'm dont hiding my scars

Judge all you want, but you know I'll take it to heart

I'll believe what you say, every last word

You decide my future just like you did my past

I just have one thing, please make it last

© 2013 GemmaMarieLeask


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You are truly a good poet. A few spelling corrections for you. Fifth line, like is 'lik'. Sixth line, one is 'on'.

Posted 11 Years Ago


GemmaMarieLeask

11 Years Ago

Thanks you! It means a lot. And thanks:) I'm horrible at spelling lol xD

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Added on January 16, 2013
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Hey:) I am a 14 year old girl who loves sports. I play 9 xD Also I love drawing and writting poetry. I use them as a way to escape. Alot of my poetry is kind of dark and depressing for I use it as str.. more..

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