cant be a dream

more of a song really,about somebody that never fails to amaze me

deep in tune
with something,
that,never seemed so real,

it cant be a dream

silence echoes
but i can still,
hear, your hearts desire,

in the telephone wire

and all i can hold
drifts away with the blindfold
surrounding me.
and i know i can "be"
because of the love
and the peace you bring

timeless minds
brings something right and,
so new,

like it belongs to you

the biggest picture
could be our painting,
a canvas, to do as we please

of the greatest art piece

and all i can hold,
drifts away with the blindfold,
surrounding me,
and i know i can "be",
because of the love,
and the peace you bring,

so where you gonna take me next?
ive got my peace. so i dont need rest
and
if you wanna put that to the test
then
ya better be warned that your gonna get my best
so where do you wanna feel me next?
i got your smile. so i dont need a rest
and
if you want to put that to the test
then please feel free cos you've not seen my best

and all i can hold,

drifts away with the blindfold,
surrounding me,

and i know i can "be",

because of the love,

and the peace you bring,

Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

A very pleasant piece that conveys love and devotion well. Flows well. Nice job with this!