New and Old (chp1)

REVISED!!!!!welcome to one of my many books, I like to jump right in so lets hit it! (sorry for the format its from using note pad to wright)

The world is not as it used to be the sun still shines the same, the sky is still as blue as can be, people
have changed and for once in my life I preferred being lonely. The company of Elizabeth was all i needed
she was no person no animal but an object I trusted her like I never trusted anything else in my life
she saved my life on countless occasions she was given to me back before the sun turned black and
fire fell from the sky I began to reminisce of how things used to be.

            " Genesis try it one more time and do it right this time"

 my trainer bellowed at me from his perch high in the ever greens I squinted my eyes; brought my knee to the ground and gathered up all the strength I had left and pushed off in to the sky. All my focus was on gathering up speed I had no time to distrust myself only to have faith. Suddenly I felt it; a wrenching feeling
I’m my shoulder blades it felt as though my bones were being wrenched out of my skin. A tingling, burning feeling took my body as though a spell had been placed on me. I began to fall, I closed my eyes and drew in a deep breath pushing the pain far into the back of my mind and began to flex my shoulders back and forth as hard as I could, I began to hear a soft whooshing sound

"yes yes,"

 I began to smile while never taking my concentration off the sky. The next thing I knew I was souring through the +flying I was actually flying, I let out a sigh of relief and for the first time I looked down, I saw nothing not the ground not houses I just tasted the wet moisture of the clouds around me. I took a sharp turn now fully confident in my new found abilities then I turned towards the earth and began to dive; my long hair tickling my ears as I began to pick up more and more speed. So instinctively I pulled my wings closer to my body to gain more speed, I knew that if I was going to really fly the only way was to throw all fear out of my mind. Suddenly I heard a voice cry out, though I could barely hear it the sound traveled thought the tree tops so I trusted out my wings and I had this feeling that my spine was being ripped out "a lot easier to get going than it is to stop isn’t it" said the far off voice as I felt two strong arms under my arm pits hoisting me up into the air. Not even a split second later I my toes gently touching the ground, I smiled

    "you’re not such an awful teacher after all, I mean yeah your ruff around the edges but who could blame you, you’re like what ninety something" I snickered and gave him a slap on the arm

               "ha ha, so adorable. I have a gift for you."

 he said as he reached behind his back, Seconds later revealing a sword that first glance I thought it was great in length, the glint nearly blinding. The hilt made of a hard bone masterfully crafted. I reached out and gently gripped the hilt, it fitted my hand perfectly. It wasn't heavy but certainly not light. Its balance... perfect I turned it over and over again inspecting for any flaws but there was none to be found. I squinted at the blade and saw that it had been painstakingly hand forged in a blazing fire,
folded many times giving it a distinct pattern with many layers of steel, its edge... sharpened razor thin, with a profound curve meeting the hilt.

     “It’s incredible that you were strong enough in your old age to make such a sword, it’s the most beautiful thing             I have ever”

 I looked up to thank him but he interrupted my thoughts.

      "There’s no need for thanks, you’re going to need it" he looked at me solemnly
      "you know I’m leaving you right? I have nothing left to teach you"

I said nothing, but rather reached out for him attentively, and held him tight.
  

  "plus, if I don’t leave now" he laughed "you might wind up getting wiser and better than I ever could be, and we can’t have that now can we"

 I began to feel my emotions grasp my chest and yank at my heart, I was angry, scared, how could he leave me, he was like the father I never had, he put me in my place when I needed it, held me when I needed it and taught me how to be the best I can be, and now he was leaving me , I wasn't (pat left off) sure rather I should cry or punch him, but to spit all my feelings I understood
why he had to go.

       "Im going to miss you, you old fart, try not to get into too much trouble, and be safe" I managed a half smile
      "haha have you ever known me to be anything else"

he grinned as he opened his bluish grey wings and pushed off into the sky. Just like that I was alone, it’s amazing how someone who has been in your life for a decade could be gone in just a split second, I looked around at the tall grass that came up to my waist. Where to go I wasn't 100 percent sure but I knew I could stay here any longer. I looked up towards the sky as some birds flew overhead. I began walking towards my shack.

Author's Note

ignore grammar and spelling rough draft and tell me all you have to say!

Reviews

[Justin]

that is awesome, it is like an adventure!!!!

[bikergirl3636]

Thank you so much, I'll be posting new chapters weekly or daily depending :D

[Justin]

your welcome, that will be awesome, i cant wait for them!!! :)

[A. Amos]

I really like the flow and your story telling is simply spectacular!

[bikergirl3636]

Thank you so much I think the first few chapters are better than the rest.:p

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[bikergirl3636]

If there is any thing i can do to improve other than spelling ans grammar let me know.