Afterglow

Afterglow

She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered
every second of every hour of the night just passed.
She wouldn't shower, not today, perhaps not even tomorrow
instead she would wear him, inside and out
until the call of life forced her hand,
a hand that slid slowly down into an ever growing wetness.
She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered,
her hand his, her fingers him...

Author's Note

Not tried this genre before, as a bloke I'm far to "clumsy" :)

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

As a bloke I think you're sensationally sensual. ;) This was so provocative and yet managed so tastefully; something very challenging to do in erotica. I think you highly underestimate your talent in the genre. Well done, I say.

[Gee]

Thanks Fabian, chuffed you enjoyed.
Hope you are well

[Soren]

Sensuous, sexual, errotic, romantic soft short and sweet. Lovely

[Gee]

Thanks Soren, am surprised this got had this many comments.
Always appreciate your visits

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Gee
i feel e softness to this piece
a gentle yet romantic eve and the memories of it, the that she felt strongly about come to the fore…she loved the passion so much that she preferred to keep his scent on her for as long as she could…. a lovey intimate piece….
warmly, B🌷🌷🌷

[Gee]

Thank you Betty :)
Hope all is well with you

[Betty Hermelee]

a pleasure always Gee, thank you for asking🌷🌷
warmly, B

[Chris Shaw]

You have penned this write so tastefully Gee. Very sensual. Not an ounce of clumsiness there. We have sun this morning. I hope the same for you in MK. Have a great Monday.

Chris

[Gee]

Thanks Christine, appreciate very much your comments.
Cold here today, blustery with rain on the way. Site work is pants at the best of times but even worse when knee deep in mud:) Serves me right for not listening at school

[Chris Shaw]

We need our construction workers. Very important !! Have a good week.

[Arundass TP]

This is a lovable poem with multiple inner meanings I can sort out. Good work

[Gee]

Thank you sir

[Marie]

Wow! A very delicately inked sensual write, Gee. A classic write and absolutely NOTHING 'clumsy' about it at all! Lovely write! Well done, dear Gee. Hope you are keeping well, dear friend...

[Gee]

All well here thanks Marie.
You are the first lady to review this I think all others are shy:)
Thank you

[Marie]

Laughing! No need for the ladies to be shy because the poem is very delicate, nothing vulgar or crude about it. The afterglow around the poem is of a beautiful rainbow, dear Gee. So pleased you are all well. Thank you again, dear friend...

[Red Brick Keshner]

Ah, all there is to tell is that I’ve witnessed that before and relishing the realisation that I did that for them is quite intimate and priceless. (No textbook or film could match that interaction and its afterglow)

[Gee]

Thank you kindly sir

[redzone]

now here is a classy erotic poem. well done Gee, well done!!

Curt

[Gee]

Thank you Curt

[John the Baptist]

Heavy erotic stuff here, Gee. Liked especially the last lines. Nothing like a little solo polo to keep the fire burning.

[Gee]

Thank you JTB

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i like this naughty little poem. it's very suggestive but without going over-the-top. the female persona She is obviously enjoying life and trying to draw out those good feelings. so why shouldn't we all?

[Gee]

Thanks Ern. Folk usually shy away from reviewing writing on the subject of sex etc.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i am fearless.