Hair...A ravin' ink prompt 2nd November...Gee, sunny MK, England(not the UK)

Nonsense

To the frone they said(heir)
or a wabbit wiv big feet(hare)
short and curlies p'raps(hair)
jenital topiary... neat
tis a topic stwange
to write poems on
when your eye queue low
and all sense 'as gone.

Author's Note

This note for Jacob:)
Exqueues grandma and smellin' errrers

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i checked out a couple of your poems now, and it got m curious. is there a reason you use this style?
i thought maybe you have a toddler in the house. my niece, who is six, still pronounces her Rs as Ws and she keeps dropping her Ps and Ts.
i enjoyed this poem too. especially the first tree lines. they not only rhyme, but your use of syntax was very clever.

[Lorry]

I would have suggested hair on a g string, but then noticed you had topiary covered! 😃
Hope you are well Gee.

[Gee]

Morning, I knew you if any would understand:)
I expect to be pulled on my many errors!
All good here thanks, hope you are well

[Lorry]

I've just noticed your note excusing grandma and smelling errers! That has made my day!

[Gee]

It really gets up Jacobs nose when folk on a writing site post that:)))

[Gee]

Should really write a poem with that title

[Lorry]

Me too, believe it or not. It only makes you pay more attention to it.
If someone questions mine, I just blame being Scottish for it, 'cos you know how us lot talk! 😃

[Gee]

Poem done and posted