Dear death

Simple words on a Saturday morning

And when you come for me dear death
youll find not fearful tears,
as I have lived a love filled life
for nigh on four score years.
I was raised a child, raised my own
was loved, and have loved back,
have walked this world in honest shoes
along an honest track.
I've helped where help was needed most
without request or plea,
have shouldered tears, quelled their fears
as they have done for me.
So when you come for me dear death
please heed what I have said,
and as you catch my final breath
remember,
a good man dies but is never dead...

Reviews

[River]

Again, another stellar poem. The flow of the words is so rhythmic and the piece itself really delivers on all fronts. Your style of poetry really appeals to me. :)

[Gee]

Thank you, I'm glad you approve

[D. Mansfield]

Loved it, Thank you for another wonderful poem.

[Gee]

Thank you for both reading and commenting

[Weeping willow]

Wonderfully expressed poem, love the flow of words. The subject of death seems to make people fear what they do not know beyond the unknown. But I feel when the time comes we will understand the presence of hope beyond this life. ;-}

[Gee]

Thank you :)

[Mk.t.g]

Wonderfully composed, Gee! I absolutely loved this one. Ahhh... Honestly, this one is truly an art. The way he is carefully telling how he has led a good life with morals and values is just awe-inspiring. Indeed, people with high morals and principles may physically be gone, but they always rest in the heart of those who remember. Thanks for sharing, Gee!
Mk.t.g

[Gee]

Thank you :))

[AYVID N]

I just loved this poem. A good man is never dead. He is blessed.

[Gee]

Thank you Divya

[Ranger Kessel]

Love is forever. A beautiful poem and reminder.

[Gee]

Thank you kindly RK

[Adelina Keith]

I like the tone of your poem. A lot of people are scared of death. You face it without fear. I love the life story told in the poem. It flows nicely. I enjoyed the read.

[Gee]

Thank you Adelina

[duff]

What a journey you take the reader on. A proud life full of warmth and wisdom. Being afraid doesn't exist and ready for whatever comes our way. All boxes checked and fulfilled. I really like it Gee. Nice job.

[Gee]

Thanks Duff, appreciate you and your reviews:)

[duff]

You are so welcome.

[Pete]

simple words that say so oh so much. truth conquers even death. well said ... :)

[Gee]

Cheers Pete.

[Lykos]

I think this is the best, when you live your life right and without regrets, you don't fear death. You've lived a good life and you can embrace death with a smile.
Brilliant piece, well done!!

[Gee]

Thank you Lykos