Dying for Spring(Autumn)

Simple words on a season's change

November days come dull and drear
as summer lost and winter near,
with mist and cloud becoming one
to veil from sight a waning sun.
Whilst on the ground warm pastel hues
are mulched beneath man's boots and shoes,
to rot and meld with mother earth
this season's death then springs rebirth

Author's Note

A quickie on a Sunday morning !

Reviews

[lightsong]

You nailed it at the end! creative and clever, it's like dying to be born again... the process of rebirth from Autumn till spring, lovely one dear Gee the gentleman~ ;>

[Gee]

Thank you (again), so glad you liked this :))

[Bonnie Paige]

So sorry you don't love fall as it is one of my favorite seasons.
Crisp, clean, cooling air of fall, brings me alive after stuffy hot summer nights and sweltering days. Great writing I felt your dislike, but on a clear, breezy, sunny fall day walk into the beautiful colors of the seasons birth.

[Gee]

Thanks Bonnie

[Stella Armour]

The circle of seasons never fails to amaze me.
Spring brings hope and new life, yet autumn has a special warm, mellow glow that i love .

[Gee]

Thanks Stella

[alanwgraham]

Simple but very nice Gee. It's hard to read these words without thinking about the existential problems facing us. Spring seems far away with lots of uncertainty ahead.
Take care,
Alan

[Gee]

Cheers Alan

[Lydia Shutter]

Gee, this is such a lovely poem! Indeed, November is not a pretty month in northern climes. Great upbeat ending with the promise of springtime. I liked it a lot. Lydi**

[Gee]

Thanks Lydia

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A lovely poem Gee which pay homage to this favorite season of mine. There is just something during this time of year that captures my heart. It's in the colors, the scent, and even in the muted light of day during this time. You literally feel nature around you preparing itself for rest. There is just a spiritual awareness that goes beyond the flesh and recognizing our connection to all things of this world. Thank you for sharing your poem.

[Gee]

Thank you Carlos

[Cherrie Palmer]

This is how I like to picture nature. Loved it.

[Gee]

Thanks Cherrie :)

[Pete]

great find for me this day. love the rhyme, rhythm and flow. i've always thought of nov. as the grey month. excellent, really captures the essence of this transitory month ... :)

[Gee]

Cheers Pete, appreciate you reading and commenting

[Patricia]

Lovely, I haven’t done rhyme for awhile, well none I would share, this expresses everything I feel right now, well done!

[Gee]

Thank you Patricia

[mattavelli]

Hello, Gee! :)
This is a lovely rhyme for the season. Thanks for sharing.

[Gee]

Hi Matt, cheers.
Hope you are all keeping well