Jake was a 5th Christmas present for my daughter who is now nearing her 21st birthday.
I cradled him as his wee heart stilled. Miss him terribly. The pup, Max, now wears his collar in his honour.
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Losing a precious dog is so sad, especially if they are up in age and you've had them for some time . You wrote a beautiful eulogy for Jake, and your new pup will be a good comfort. Enjoy!
Best, B.
Oh Gee! I know the feeling. Such a beautiful piece. I’ve recently posted a Blog Entry to give writers the opportunity to share what pets they have had.
It's so sad to lose a trusted friend, whether animal or human. The title brought back a memory for me I'd like to share. I heard a young boy ask a preacher once if animals went to heaven. The preacher, with imperial authority, declared to the boy that animals did not have souls, were incapable of repentance or salvation and thus, could not go to heaven. The boy looked puzzled for a minute and then asked, "But, preacher, where did Jesus get that white horse he's riding in Revelation? Just like that the preacher's whole argument fell through. All he could think of to say was, Well, son, with God, all things are possible. So I would venture that includes animals being in heaven. It was an exchange I'll never forget. I enjoyed the read.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
I Enjoyed your review very much, thank you.
I posted a piece called " The Preacher Man" a whi.. read moreI Enjoyed your review very much, thank you.
I posted a piece called " The Preacher Man" a while ago this about a young boy quizzing the preacher about his faith
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I noticed here that you have a review on this piece from "barleygirl". I always liked her writing an.. read moreI noticed here that you have a review on this piece from "barleygirl". I always liked her writing and she seemed such a sweet person. Do you have any idea why she left WC? I clicked over to read some of her work and saw that her profile had been closed.
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Hi Fabian, BG does dip in and out of the cafe but she also has had trouble with folk trolling her. H.. read moreHi Fabian, BG does dip in and out of the cafe but she also has had trouble with folk trolling her. Hopefully she will return :)
Well, I hope it wasn't that egotistical narcissist, Jay G. I presume he was born an a-hole and just.. read moreWell, I hope it wasn't that egotistical narcissist, Jay G. I presume he was born an a-hole and just got bigger. I had to block him just to shut him up. I guess there are idiots anywhere you go. Thanks and have a wonderful New Year, F.
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I'm yet to have the pleasure of him telling me how shite my writing is and that I should, with haste.. read moreI'm yet to have the pleasure of him telling me how shite my writing is and that I should, with haste, go read Stephen Fry
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That's FUNNY! I love folks with a good sense of humor. The world needs more of that; both good sense.. read moreThat's FUNNY! I love folks with a good sense of humor. The world needs more of that; both good sense and humor! (laughing)
Had not previously read this
Each dog we have lost has been a terrible heartache
This, our last because of our age, will be even worse and I don't know if my 50% heart will be able to handle it
They are such wonderful companions
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
They are indeed Dave, they are.
Take care and thank you
Its sad losing our pets list my
first two cats. cuddles and Abby
momma and daughter calicos
it's been some years ago but
still an aching void is felt
I have Lucky he's my all white
cat such a big lovable baby
he's 7 years old now..hope
you are doing well Gee..
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
All good here thank you.
Appreciate you popping in
AWWWW! This is so precious! Sad, but precious, becuz the way you share your heart is like no other on this website. You have the most tender, caring heart! This dog represents your daughter's life, basically, so it's more than just losing a pet. It's the end of an era. Keep your paws up! (((HUGS)))
Why an Ark for the saving of creatures if they were considered non-essential - QED, of course they go to heaven. And when lost to the celestial green fields up there, stillness looms, hovers and never quite goes away. So many sights and sounds linger - tearfully missed when... gone. A dog is for life.. both owner and darling beast.. a memory that walks to heel -or not - forever. Your poem needs a pack of tissues, Gee, is sad and beautiful
I've always said losing a dog is no different than losing a sibling. It killed me when I lost my dog many years ago. They're true friends that never complain and always fill our hearts with love. I'm sorry for your loss.
Devoted family man and lover of life.
Simply written, easily understood "stuff" for those without code breaking skills. You will NEVER need Google to understand me:)
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