A living death then life

Perhaps :)

What then once futile life is done
is there a place to head,
or is this it, no more, no less
an eternity as dead.
No, surely once we're done were not
that's when the fun begins,
when all we hoped but never gained
is got whilst fatty sings.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello my friend. I liked the logic of the words written.
"No, surely once we're done were not
that's when the fun begins,
when all we hoped but never gained
is got whilst fatty sings."
The above lines. So wonderful and so honest. Maybe we can't be done till we find the final sleep? Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Gee]

Thank you Coyote, hope you are keeping well

[Coyote Poetry]

I am doing well and I hope you are doing well. You are welcome my friend.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is brilliant
Reminds me of being in heaven
Listening to the underdog sing the songs to the Crowds
People who never got a chance in this life get their turn in the next
Love it

[Gee]

Thanks Julie, hope all is well with you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

The fat lady sings, it is all over...
I have wondered this same thing....is there something after this...or do we just go into the ground or into ash and that's it....
kind of sad if that is true...
nothing to look forward to....except worms.
j.

[Gee]

A tad tardy with my thank you, thank you Jacob, hope you are well

[mattavelli]

Hello, Gee! :)
War is peace
Freedom is slavery
Ignorance is strength
Death is birth? I think it fits the pattern. Haha
Every moment of life is yours, and each of those moments is an eternity if you measure it with a small enough ruler, so live this life like you plan to in whatever paradise is waiting for you. Are you going to keep your pants on at the great orgy in the hereafter, or are you going to grab that fatty and make her sing? Haha

[Gee]

Cheers Matt, hope you are well

[Chris Shaw]

Now wouldn't that be something Gee if this life was just a dress rehearsal for the next? I'm an optimist but I think that might be stretching it too far. However I'm all with science. Show me the science and I could be swayed. An interesting little poem which will create must debate. Hope all is well with you.

Chris

[Gee]

Hi Christine, all good. I'm a "once you're dead you're dead" kinda guy :)
Thank you

[Chris Shaw]

You know, I'm that sort of gal too. The afterlife is for dreamers:)

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha yes well...when she sings she sings don't she!? nice blend of defeatism and humor sir! I believe the true goal in the material world lay beyond death's door ... holding to it changes ones perspective and actions sharply ;) peace and joy Gee .. joy and health
E.

[Gee]

Hi E, cheers. Hope you are keeping well.

[Einstein Noodle]

I am sir .. its a good life .. old age and retirement have advantages .. and it doesn't take the almighty dollar to get it. ;)