The glimmer in the distance the light at tunnels end brings little joy or comfort for hearts that need to mend. And the hope now felt by many will not ease the sad despair nor will it stem the tears o'er festive days at the sight of an empty chair..
Oh my Gordon that empty chair is so real... I see it so clearly.
I needed to go back into the many poems you have written to find one I had not read...
I really liked this poem.
Lisa, now in Madrid for 5 days
Oh that’s profound, beautiful and so well written! Bravo
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thanks Patricia, have seen a few of these over the years.
Hope you are now a chicken soup fre.. read moreThanks Patricia, have seen a few of these over the years.
Hope you are now a chicken soup free zone :))
2 Years Ago
You’re welcome Gee, I have advanced to chicken fried rice so yay! Steak and potatoes are just arou.. read moreYou’re welcome Gee, I have advanced to chicken fried rice so yay! Steak and potatoes are just around the corner! ;)
A sonnet. mourning sunhine flirting is an ironic addition
For in this brutal turning tide
of history, it's just an empty chair.
Our surroundings, the things present or not present tell a story. I thought the premise of the empty chair was a powerful image. Facts are worth many descriptions.
You are a trained, studied and dedicated poet. Though you do not strain to prove it. Natural expression, human and tender. Who am I to rate this poem? I can say that I like it very much. sources of buying best chair:https://reclinershunt.com/
Your writing captured my holiday feelings perfectly.
I can dance around my thoughts but they are always there, just under the surface, when I see the empty chair.
Well done.
Hello my dear friend. I do understand the poem. On the days of Christmas. I remember faces and voices missed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Hi Coyote, hope you are well.
Thank you for your kind words.
Here's wishing you and yo.. read moreHi Coyote, hope you are well.
Thank you for your kind words.
Here's wishing you and yours a very happy Christmas
3 Years Ago
Merry Christmas my dear friend and you are welcome.
very pertinent statement on pain, loss and emptiness. I guess we're all in the same boat in that we've been scared into a kind of hibernation, where we are alone and unable to connect with our loved ones. Praying it will soon be over. Nicely done!
Hmm... Whenever I think of the people who have lost their lives and their near and dear ones, due to this pandemic an uncanny sorrow reeled in my heart. May be a vaccine will erase out the fear but it will not bring back the departed. It's really sad to think..
Ironically I have been writing about all of my empty chairs sitting in my restaurants dining rooms right now thinking about how im close to having to shut it down and all of the wonderful moments i have had there in almost 20 years and i cant finish the poem because I haven't found the ending:/ but in answer to your question I have missed so very many
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Hi Robert, it's so, so sad to read of yours and thousands more like you who rely on us as social cre.. read moreHi Robert, it's so, so sad to read of yours and thousands more like you who rely on us as social creatures to make ends meet. Fingers crossed the ending you eventually find will be a happy one.
Hope you are keeping safe and well.
Thank you
Devoted family man and lover of life.
Simply written, easily understood "stuff" for those without code breaking skills. You will NEVER need Google to understand me:)
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