Sharing A Bath With Emily D

Simple words

We shared a bath
and poems too
did Emily and I,
her words long penned
did raise a smile
and also made me cry.
As what she "said"
spoke loud 'bout life
but also hushed on death,
twas beautiful,
so beautiful,
it made me catch my breath.
Then stirred inside
an urge, a need
to pen a simple rhyme,
that'll live but brief
unlike her work,
and won't stand the test of time.

Author's Note

Often read in the bath to unwind after a hard days graft...I'm fully aware of my poetry limitations :))

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

It's a creepy title. But I like where it goes.

You underestimate yourself re your poetry limitations.

[Gee]

Limitations mainly refers to my use of the English language. I use a very simple and limited bunch of words then mix 'em together to provide writing that is easily understood, hopefully.
I like reading your reviews of other folks works because you are very eloquent, and I enjoy even more your jousting with that Jay fella. Amuses me greatly.
Anyway, I'll take your review very happily and as a compliment of sorts.
Thank you Dave, I'll have a read of yours when I get a wee while to myself but there's no guaranteeing that I'll fully understand.
Take care

[Davidgeo]

Keeping it to a limited bunch of words while staying a good read is a talent unto itself. Something I sort of lack in my own writing if I'm being honest. And don't tell Jay but, it's really more about the jousting than the substance. I do think he's kind of a fraud (he copy and pastes parts of his "critiques") but not to the extent I articulate in my jabs; he's just dumb enough to take the bait every single time which is pretty hilarious to me. I'm glad I'm not the only one getting some entertainment out of that.

[Davidgeo]

… and don't worry about the whole "returning a review" thing. I know most of what I write is not really worth a review and I don't review other people seeking a return review. If it's worth it's worth it... no more, no less.

[alanwgraham]

You've caught a perfect mood here Gee. Intimate and affectionate. I almost wish I was in there with you but it might be cramped. You leave me wishing I could hear the poems -- life and death, there's not much left.
Really enjoyed.
Alan

[Gee]

Thank you kindly sir

[Gee]

I think I apologise simply so that Folk realise that I do know how simple my stuff is, unlike quite a few on here who post some right old shite but somehow can't see that it is. If ever I need a confidence booster Margie you'll be my go to lady.
Thank you kindly :))

[Gee]

Thank you Alan, have commissioned a bath in the shape of a three leaf clover, room enough for you then:))
Cheers

[barleygirl]

The whole premise of your poem -- reading in the bath -- is delightful! I love how your title seems a little decadent, but your poem comes across with childlike adoration & playfulness. Please don't apologize for having a simply-stated style. Lots of people tell me they can't understand the unusual words I use & I would love to be able to express myself with simple honesty clarity like this! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

PS -- I'm reading Stephen King's "On Writing" & he says to keep it simple. He can't stand overly ornate bullshit writing that gets in the way of what you're trying to make the reader feel . . .

[Gee]

Bollox, I replied and thanked you as a review, if you would like me to rewrite and post I can, but it takes me ages :))
Thank you, thank you, thank you :)))

[barleygirl]

Please don't worry! This website has been jerking me around alot lately!

[Robert Trakofler]

Sometimes Gee the simplest words are the Ones that shine most brilliant:) I think she would rather like these

[Gee]

Cheers Robert. Hope you are well

[Eilis]

I’m too clumsy to read in the bath, I would waste a lot of books dropping them in the water.

I can’t help but picture ED sitting on one end of the tub with that stoic, mischievous look she has in her portrait waiting to heat the poems read out loud. Of course she’s wearing her dress in my vision.

This is cool, Gee. I’ve seen several poems dedicated to Emily this week and I love the way each one shows something about the writer and their connection to this mysterious figure of the past. She does activate the imagination.

And your poem captures a certain spirit in the lines of her work and her person. An enjoyable read.

[Gee]

Thank you Eilis. I stick her at the tap end with the plug sticking into her butt which was a good thing as she had flatulence a Jersey cow would have been proud of :))
Good morning

[Eilis]

Ha! Good morning backatcha, Gee

[Chris Shaw]

Sharing a bath with Emily D. Baths are a great place to relax and chat. Add vino, candles and a few rose petals for added measure. I like this Gee it stretches the imagination and brings her up to date. She has certainly inspired many over the years and will continue to do so. Good job done.

Chris

[Gee]

Thank you kindly Christine.
Hope all is well in Berks.

[M.E.Lyle]

I do envy such people with such talent. I can barely put down two words that rhyme or make any sense. Generally, anything I do is nonsense.
You may not know it, but you too seem to have a poetic soul.
Great write.

[Gee]

You must be confusing me with another my friend, I am nowt but a half witted construction guy :))read moreYou must be confusing me with another my friend, I am nowt but a half witted construction guy :))
Thank you for your kind words.
In

[M.E.Lyle]

Oh, him. Yes, now I remember.
Well, in either case, not a bad piece of work.

[Lorry]

Inspiration from an inspiration who was inspired. The saga continues with your words finding new ears and inspiring them to read or write. We are all inspired, and inspiring... No matter what you think Gee.
You captured her essence.

[Gee]

Thanks Lorry, appreciate your more than kind words.
Hope all is well in the blustery (?) North.

[Lorry]

Horizontal rain and black skies. There's no place like home 😀

[Beccy]

I believe she would most certainly approve the poem, which is lovely, not ever so sure about the shared bath. Then again.... :))

Beccy.

[Gee]

Only if the tap end is hers :)
Thank you Beccy.