He will be...

He will be forever summer,
a warm, floral scented breeze,
blue skies and single clouds,
clouds that drift slowly, silently, to a place unknown,
perhaps to where he now rests, peacefully,
with those that went before...

He will be an aching heart and tears,
a pain that only time can heal,
a chasm to be filled with memories,
memories of childhood days,
of sibling love, laughter,
of all that is good in life,
in mankind.

He will be stories and smiles,
a warm glow,
dreams,
loved,
loved,
loved...

and forever missed.

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

I just reread this poem and the formatting leads the reader by layering the images. Truly a beautiful poem.

[Gee]

Again thank you Cherrie, I'm happy to have folk read my postings once so to get a second review and such kind words has me beaming.

[barleygirl]

This is an awesome tribute to some friend/loved one who's gone on to the next party! Nice way to show how the one no longer kicking (stanza 1) is the one to be envied. In contrast, we who are left behind are the ones with howling refrains of pain (stanza 2). One thing we can all agree upon (stanza 3), there's a much-needed angel fluttering close-by as we make our way without him/her (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Gee]

Thanks Margie, was actually written with EmmaJ in mind.
Hope all is well with you :)

[barleygirl]

Ahhhh . . . love looking at it that way now . . .

[Davidgeo]

Ain't death a b***h?

I prefer a more crass celebration. But it all feels the same at the end of the day. (not so good)

To be honest, this was probably kind of a s****y review and I wouldn't hold it against you if you just straight deleted it.

(cheers none the less my friend)

[Gee]

Lol, no deleting. Both life itself and death can be viewed that way.
Hope all is well with you David. I will raise an imaginary glass of Makers Mark to you and wish you all the best for the festive onslaught.......cheers.

[Davidgeo]

You're a delightful man. If we get to be at the end, I will look for you.

[Gee]

We will and I'll see you there :)

[richieb]

Very touching poem Gee, your heart was evident in every word. I felt the pain and courage in your words. They certainly engaged my own memories and saddened me. beautiful words for a special person. Well done my friend.
Peace, Richie b.

[Gee]

Thank you Richie

[Simone Davis]

Made me tear up I really thought this was beautifully written xx

[Gee]

Thank you kindly :)

[Alistair (Ali)]

Beautiful work Gee- really moving, and believe me mate, I'm thinking of you- I know how this one feels.
YNWA- ever!

[Gee]

Thanks Alistair. This was actually written for a lady poet who lost her brother this year. Touch wood, I'm yet to experience the pain of losing immediate family.
Enjoy the game...

[Alistair (Ali)]

It's a beautiful piece, really thoughtfully written and reads superbly.
All the best my man!

Ali

[Gee]

Cheers Ali. Sad to see the Mancs sack the petulant one, he was doing a great job :)
Hope all is well with you and yours and Santa emptied his sack for you.....hmmm, that doesn't sound good

[Alistair (Ali)]

Good times are here again!
Santa did his thang- emptied his sack under the Xmas tree- proper naughty bugger, he is ( say that in a Yoda voice, and it ALL becomes apparent)..but "Yes" things are sweet- they have to be!..and Virgil, is the s**t!..seriously!

Have a blinder mate- and if you ever fancy dangling your shoes in this parish- then look me up
Big ones!

[Gee]

You're on.
Top of the league for Xmas, an early present, hopefully still there come May.
read moreYou're on.
Top of the league for Xmas, an early present, hopefully still there come May.
Have a good one :)

[Alistair (Ali)]

I'm made up!...just don't want the bubble to burst!

[Ramneet Kaur]

Beautiful poem about a beautiful relationship. A relationship which touches the core of your heart and your soul and similarly your poem touches the hearts of the readers. I loved the analogy in the very first line,
He will be forever summer,
a warm, floral scented breeze,
blue skies and single clouds,

[Gee]

Thank you Ramneet

[Ryan I]

So sad, but a wonderful dedication. I like the optimism in the poem. My condolences to you.

[Gee]

Thank you Ryan

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

This poem touched my heart Gee. Beautifully and meaningly written tribute. Your words make it sadly clear how much you love and miss him- your brother I think. “A chasm to be filled with memories”- yes. The words you repeat so emotionally will fly to him in heaven. God bless you both.

[Gee]

Thank you Annette

[CourtniRenee]

I really enjoy your use of repetition here. It moves the poem at a slow but rhythmic pace. Your imagery is beautiful and you make use of every sense that you can to engage the reader. You don't just want us to read, you want us to feel. This is a wonderful poem, thank you so much for sharing it.

[Gee]

You're very kind Courtni, cheers