Writing rhyming verse, some make it look so easy....( Oh no, not I)
One can syllable count
or try tapping a beat
with ones hands on a desk
or a floor with ones feet,
but whatever ones choice
words must trip off the tongue,
like a favourite verse
from a song when it's sung.
So grab you a pencil
white paper yet sullied,
consider your subject
at leisure not hurried,
and slowly but surely
words'll come to your mind
and hey presto like magic
a poem you'll find.
It amazes me too. just how do some folk do it day in day out...or do they.. I imagine there are those who have a barrel load of brilliant verse just waiting to be posted... respect regardless.. and anyway.. ya pulled a half decent one off her mate :)
Nicely done and to the point. Sometimes for me, it just fits right, and other times it's like pulling teeth, then trying to put them back in! Anyway, yours seems to work well enough! Nice.
Some def do make it look easy and then there are some like me who used to think poetry is another name for rhyming lol. But ah, you're so right, it does take an effort.
Nicely written, Gee. I enjoyed reading :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
A wee bit of thinking and effort.
Glad you enjoyed
Thank you
Sometimes the words simply will not come. Other times, they flow like a fast running river, and my pen almost trips over itself in its haste get them down before they disappear back into the far recesses of my mind.
As you say my dearest Gee, 'At leisure, not hurried,' is the key.
Beccy.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Aye, tis lass....that's My Scottish ancestry creeping out :))
Thank you
It really is that easy. But readable? that's another story. Your attempt i believe was very successful. Don't tell me you wrote that in five minutes, that would depress me.
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6 Years Ago
Hey, at least you can manage it twice. Lol. You crack me up.
6 Years Ago
Yo, Gee! You've got something in common with old John, I guess!
I sometimes find it that easy. LOVE AMONG...WELL, EVERYONE was that way; just came out line after li.. read moreI sometimes find it that easy. LOVE AMONG...WELL, EVERYONE was that way; just came out line after line. sometimes it goes slow, though.
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Simply written, easily understood "stuff" for those without code breaking skills. You will NEVER need Google to understand me:)
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