Forget Me Not

Then nothing but memories

A bright new star,
memories,
tears, a smile and sigh,
a sibling's wish,
a "forget me not"
now seen in the heavenly sky

Reviews

[richieb]

Tender words that touch the heart. The Heavenly sky where we wish our souls to be someday. Well done my friend.
Richie b.

[Gee]

Thank yo Richie

[Lyn Anderson]

So sad, in a very nicely presented poem

[Gee]

Thank you..

[Ken Simm.]

A subtle and melancholy gem.

[Gee]

Thank you Ken

[Onlyme]

Bittersweet sadness came from this sweet poem of yours Gee. Made me want to cry.

[Gee]

Good morning Dee, thank you.

[Onlyme]

Morning Gee.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This is bittersweet.... sweet but sad, and you can feel it tug at your heart. I hope writing it helped you with feelings of loss, wherever they may have originated.. (add an apostrophe after sibling. Quick English nerd edit of mine, otherwise breath-taking). Lovely and contemplative.

[Gee]

Thank you Alexa. Hope you are all well

[Lorry]

The last line threw me a bit, but one things for sure Gee, the words are simply beautiful. You have captured a silent thought onto the page and left me eerily silent, which is always a good sign in many ways, but mostly just that your thought became the readers, while theirs became "wish I wrote that." :)

[Gee]

Hi Lorry, thank you

[Kelly Scheppers]

I lost my sister two weeks before Christmas, due to complications of asthma. There is never a day that goes by that I do not think of her or talk to her as though she were listening. This resonated deeply with me. Thank you, Gordon!

[Gee]

I'm so sorry for your loss Kelly.
Thank you for commenting.
Hope all is well with you and yours.

[charlie]

Beautiful, and moving.
Well composed.

[Gee]

Thank you Charlie

[Neville]

You done good my friend & I'm sure that no one here would ever contradict....N

[Gee]

Thank you Neville.
Hope you are well my friend

[Neville]

My pleasure Gee & yes, fine here ta...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

siblings, best friends...memories like stars...they pass but the light remains visible for ages.

[Gee]

Indeed.
Thank you Jacob, hope all is well with you