I am....

I am....

A Poem by Gee
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A constant

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I am night and day,
the sun and moon,
the ebbing, flowing tides.
I am the changing seasons,
reliable, predictable, dependable.
I am a smile for a sad face,
a dry shoulder for tears,
strong arms and a soft, kind heart.
I am proud, devoted, loyal,
loving..........irreplaceable.
I am eternally grateful,
grateful that I am her father.

© 2018 Gee


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Excellent Gee!
"reliable, predictable, dependable"
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Thank you..
Ghania

7 Years Ago

You're Welcome. :)
once again powerful poignant. Lighter, yet just as powerful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Fathers and daughters....thank you
very very powerful written words. thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Thank you Roxanne
wow! very powerful & so professional

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Thank you Carola
I think it's beautiful. Well written and a lovely description. Good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Thank you...
Its simplicity is enormous in & of itself...well penned

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Thank you..
I don't think my friend, I feel, and through Your simple yet powerful words, Your joyous heart was jumping to paint this deep and meaningful part of You... I loved "constant" because in this one word all Your thoughts are laid to us, very sweet, sincere and faithful, a real spirit of a Father, Bless You and Your little Angel*

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Thank you light
This is my dad and he's the most amazing man I know. So, if these words are truly you, you're doing an amazing job ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

You're a lucky fella then Sam. I was raised by mum, so try to be to my daughter everything I would h.. read more
Sahm Moore

7 Years Ago

She's lucky, then :) It's always a happy thing when ppl can take tough upbringings and not let that .. read more
Gee

7 Years Ago

Not as lucky as I. She's a beautifully rounded young lady and we, the three of us share a great life.. read more
This moving piece presents imagery that suggests an all encompassing presence in a young girl's life. Actually, the girl's age can't be told, but the type of support described indicates a child or maybe an early adolescent. The speaker indicates his own gratitude, so the benefits are reciprocal. May it remain so. Very nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Spot on JTB. Thank
You are everything to her, and she will look for a man who will treat her with respect and love....just as you have.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Gee

7 Years Ago

Fingers crossed....thank you

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Last Updated on December 1, 2018
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Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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