A colours choir sang vibrantly

Spring...an oldie given an airing

Heads bowed as if in quiet prayer
the daffodils they swayed,
whilst dappled light through dancing trees
upon the lush grass played.

A bluebell sea rolled silently
to fallow fields yet sown,
o'er which in coming warmer months
a yellow quilt be thrown.

The thin veiled mists of early morn'
that washed the world with white,
cede to the over eager sun
days ever warm and bright.

A colours choir sang vibrantly
from life that bloomed anew,
to celebrate the birth of Spring
now another winter through.

Reviews

[Valentine]

We are approaching the coming od autumn when all turns brightly colored and beautiful. Valentine

[Gee]

Indeed and colder, wetter weather, brrrr. Thank you

[horizon]

very soothing poetry..and yes the 3rd stanza could be the 1st one..because you've described of morning in that which could give a nice start as the morning is the starting period...

[Gee]

Will probably tinker with, again. Thank you for the review

[horizon]

:):):):) welcome Gee

[Miss Sharon]

Please let us all know when this is finished...you have a very beautiful start! ~Sharon

[Gee]

Thank you, have just added another stanza, still more to come

[Miss Sharon]

Well it is just beautiful "as is" but if you want to add more you certainly may! ~Sharon

[Gee]

Thank you, I'll leave it at that

[.]

A lovely write, Gee.

I can see that it is indeed unfinished; there is so much more you can add to this piece.

That being said, it does stand quite well on its own. Very lyrical and beautiful in its rhyme and expression.

One to certainly revisit and expand upon. Nice work.

[Gee]

Cheers Doodley, appreciate you taking the time to comment

[Gee]

Hi Doodley, have added another couple of verses, whatdya think. Cheers

[.]

It is more complete now. At least to me it is. Very graceful stanzas, Gee. You could arguably leave it as it is now. Unless you have more to add.

[Gee]

Thanks for reading and commenting again Doodley, much appreciated.

[.]

Anytime. Glad to offer my limited services. Haha.

[Gee]

Gratefully received, cheers

[Lord of mad men]

Very good luck. I loved reading every word

[Gee]

Thank you kindly

[Heather]

This is such a delight to read. The simplicity of it and the extensive imagery work in unison to create something pretty epic, I thoroughly enjoyed this

[Gee]

Thank you..

[Michele Devlin]

Aww, I like it. Love the daffodils and violets too.

[Gee]

Thank you. Have got to add a couple of verses when back from hols and have time

[Shabeeh Haider]

Spring is indeed a time to celebrate.
Nicely penned

[Gee]

Thanks Shabeeh

[. serah .]

~ this heart-song is brimming with beautiful images and magical instances of alliteration... ~ my favourite one is "a colours choir sang vibrantly"... ~ i like flowers, flutterbys and colours a lot...

[Gee]

Thank you kindly

[. serah .]

~ you're welcome...

[Baby Ricochet]

Living in Florida I've not seen spring in awhile but this reads like her.

[Gee]

I'd miss the seasons.......cheers