A colours choir sang vibrantly

Spring...an oldie given an airing

Heads bowed as if in quiet prayer
the daffodils they swayed,
whilst dappled light through dancing trees
upon the lush grass played.

A bluebell sea rolled silently
to fallow fields yet sown,
o'er which in coming warmer months
a yellow quilt be thrown.

The thin veiled mists of early morn'
that washed the world with white,
cede to the over eager sun
days ever warm and bright.

A colours choir sang vibrantly
from life that bloomed anew,
to celebrate the birth of Spring
now another winter through.

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

This is just beautiful my friend and it flows just like spring sunshine ... light and lovely.
"A bluebell sea rolled silently
to fallow fields yet sown,
o'er which in coming warmer months
a yellow quilt be thrown."

Such lovely images ... well done you... best poem i have read in a while :)

[Gee]

High praise Stella, thank you. Thought I'd throw this one out again as the sun has made a long overdue apoearance.

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful poem Gee. Uplifting and makes me long for spring. Not long to go now. Still trying to keep warm. Not quite as cold today. Have a great week-end.

Chris

[Gee]

Thanks Christine. Yep a wee bit warmer, 5 weeks then off to Tenerife for a week, can't wait.
Have a great weekend too ( I'm working tomorrow morning :(()

[Wild Rose]

Daffs dance for me in our garden right now > Snowdrops are gone - crocuses also
Maple tree is in bud as is the climbing rose

Birds are collecting their nest building bits

These are the pictures your poems is building in my minds eye as I read
I wish this site would accept my videos with spring flowers flowing as in our garden
Then you could add your words to it

[Gee]

Good morning. Thank you.
I love this time of the year, spirits are lifted by both the warming weather and new life cropping up all around

[barleygirl]

WOW! WOW! And WOW! This is one of the best spring poems I've ever read! I love it! So many dynamic descriptions where you personify all the plants and other players. The first 2 lines of both the 1st & 2nd stanzas -- banging! Some of the best imagery I've ever read! So playful & uninhibited & originally-stated! This makes me want to romp naked in a field of wildflowers! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Gee]

Thanks Margie I’m blushing. Some times the words fall right, some times not. Glad you enjoyed.
read moreThanks Margie I’m blushing. Some times the words fall right, some times not. Glad you enjoyed.
Hope all is well with you and the hounds

[Mrudula Rani]

The true poet in you shines through brilliantly ( Sorry I have no wise remarks to add) in this poem!
( actually even when you are extremely naughty too you write perfect poetry). Loved the A colours choir sang vibrantly.

[Gee]

Ach, away wi ya. You'll have me believing you.
Seriously, I appreciate each and every review and our little chats.
Thank you

[Mrudula Rani]

I do too, love the little chats with you( brings the best in me?????).

[Norah]

This is just breathtaking! i love it

[Gee]

Thank you Norah

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A you tease! Spring seems like land far off and stormy seas to cross to get there still. But we can dream as you paint what IS to come Gee.

[Gee]

Thank you John

[Quickbeam]

Beautiful poem, the promise of spring.

[Gee]

Cheers....

[emipoemi]

Sometimes I wish that I could leave less than twenty-five freaking characters as a review (or perhaps a simple emoji)....for I can't think of anything to say about this except.........wow!

(....."days ever warmer, bright".....this is a great line, only, I can't help but pick out the small detail of "days ever warmER" ultimately meaning "bright" would become "brighter"....however "days ever warm [and]"....that's what would elicit "bright"....gotta have some concordance in your words....or it's not only incorrect grammatically, it sounds rather awkward). Well done!!

[Gee]

Thank you, changes made. It is good that you both enjoy and improve my scribbles when you visit. This is much appreciated.

[Ken Simm.]

Simple stuff from a simple mind you say. My arse!
This follows a tradition and adds immesurably to it.

[Gee]

Lol, "my arse".
How about uncomplicated and easily understandable Ken ?
Thank you for reading and commenting

[Ken Simm.]

Nah that doesn't work either.

[Ken Simm.]

See me after prep.

[Gee]

Mmmmmmmmm, guess I'm just lucky the right words sometimes fall in a pleasing way..