Give me to the summer breeze

One final walk together An oldie updated 28/02/20

It's time my love you lived again
removed the widow's black,
leave sorrow for all yesterday's
invite happiness "come back"

So don a dress of pastel hues
paint a smile upon your face,
walk me for a last time dear
to my final resting place.

Take me to the highest hill
give me to the summer breeze,
to gently fall on lush green grass
'neath the shade of aged trees.

Then take your leave, live again
let another share your heart,
as I will love for eternity,
we will never truly part.

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Now this is what i call awesome poetry. Relateable, and i can feel the poem's meaning. Priceless. 100 points.

[Gee]

Cheers Danny..

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Haha yes, cheers :)

[Sai]

This is really beautiful. The rhyming is so smooth! :)

[Gee]

Thank you Sai,appreciate your kind words

[wordman]

reads like a play gee,enjoted the visit

[Gee]

Cheers WM.appreciated as always

[jeannemarie coulter]

superb in every line, a beautiful and inspiring word tapestry...

[Gee]

Thank you,appreciate your kind words

[GreenShoes]

I never used to cry very often, but it seems I do it quite easily the last few years. The tears filled my eyes by the 4th stanza. Beautiful and sad, yet encouraging, the perfect combination.

[Gee]

Thank you Karen,glad you enjoyed.

[Becky]

Such a touching poem. Good work :)

[Gee]

Thank you Becky

[m.s.early]

A lovely employment to let go.

[Gee]

Cheers,I appreciate your reading

[Jen Walters]

a very touching poem about death and love. Sad but happy in its own way; well maybe not happy but hopeful. This is the truest kind of love to have. Great flow here and structure; love it thanks for sharing this poem.

[Gee]

Thank you for reviewing

[Jen Walters]

you're welcome, I am also trying to get people to review my poems as I am trying to get published or picked up by a magazine or newspaper somewhere. Thanks

[Zahra]

Take me to the highest hill,
give me to the summers breeze,
to gently fall on green grass,lush,
'neath the shade of aged trees.

the lines are well crafted. Combination of hope and melancholy made this a wonderful read.

[Gee]

Thank you..

[~]

How sad the heart is when we lose our dearest ones. But, it is good to know that we will live in the hearts of the ones we love the most.
Darling write!

[Gee]

Thank you Miss D