True Love

A few words for my good lady wife

Let marriage be our sanctuary
peacefulness our bed,
contentment be the pillow
upon which we rest our head,
and the love we've shared these many years
be woven as a quilt,
under which, within each other's arms,
we'll share this life we've built.

Author's Note

For my wife

Reviews

[Lizardo]

A wonderful read and excellent, I really love how you added everything like, with the love of your heart.
This a wonderful poem

[Gee]

Cheers,very kind

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Amazing if she doesn't melt, somethings wrong with her. Great work. She should love it.

[Gee]

Thanks very much.

[Matching Socks]

That was very nice. :)
Not soppy, very romantic.

[Gee]

Quote"not a romantic body in your body"my wife.Very seldom show her my poems.
Thanks

[Gee]

Body=bone (1st one)

[Matching Socks]

Show her! Why are men such dummies sometimes. :)

[Gee]

In a Valentine's card maybe.
Thanks

[Matching Socks]

There you go! :) you should share, she will love it!

[Corset]

Gee, that was so beautiful, the rhyming tight and the sentiments of true love overwhelming, excellent.

[Gee]

Thanks,surprising sometimes at how good comments are for such simple verse.That said,I'll take anything offered,good or bad.Again thanks

[ANTO]

Gee - this is so sincere and beautiful my friend.
Proud of you mate
.sniff.

[Gee]

Cheers Anto,might show it to the good lady wife one day,surprise her.

[ANTO]

Yep - highly recommend that course of action Gee :)

[Gee]

Hmmm,might gain a few brownie points.The daughter however different kettle of fish(Apple of my eye),"dad only nerds write poetry"What chance eh?

[ANTO]

Aww - but sure its always hard enough pleasing one lady never mind two. (I'll get it in the neck for that now lol) -

[Gee]

Thanks for reviewing and chit chat.Quite difficult to get feedback,could be my style,that I'm a newbie or the poems,on the whole, are a wee bit simple.

[ANTO]

Newbie-ism probably Gee - it'll pick up though - keep the faith !!

[Gee]

Cheers Anto

[Ayvid N]

This poem is so endearing and sweet that it is just awesome. A rare marriage, a rare love. God bless you!

[Gee]

That's very kind of you to say.Take care

[Ayvid N]

You too. And have a wonderful New Year!

[Gee]

You to Divya.

[cre]

beautiful tribute there Gee... simplistic and clever format allowing the story to take precedence over the subtle rhyme, well done.

[Gee]

Thanks,very kind.

[Ayvid N]

You too. And have a wonderful New Year!