Not Another Love Poem

A cynical jest on the ubiquity of love...

Oh, another love poem!

how new, enlightening and fresh!

thank you for sharing this with us

remind me to remember your name

so I can distinguish it from the rest.

 

So you've been let down again, have you?

how many times is that now?

it's what you feel, your emotions - oh, right

this is real, this is life - oh, of course!

Yeah, this is just what we want - and how.

 

Yes, it's all part of letting go, I know

we all can relate to it too

it's your soul down on paper - just so

is there no other side to your soul?

Look, I've better things to do, so just go.

Reviews

[heard of meese]

first sentence- is it another love poem or not? im so confused :(
second sentence- i like the word fresh. it reminds me of someone who takes showers often.
third sentence- your welcome.
fourth sentence- trisha. aka heard of meese. :)
fifth sentence- oh im sure you wont get confused. xD well i hope not :/
sixth sentence- not on tuesdays.
seventh sentence- all together? like 11.?
eigth sentence- i mean, if thats what im suppose to feel? is this suppose to all go together? i think im reading it to slow.
nitnth sentence- did you pinch yourself? maybe its a dream. :)
tenth sentence- how you know what i want. you a stalker. ha.
eleventh sentence- okay. i think i got that one.
twelvth sentence- good.
thirteeth sentence- Ahhhh get it offf!!! :o *scared*
fourteenth sentence- how many is there suppose to be?
fifteenth sentence- FINE YOU DONT GOTTA BE SO MEAN YOU BIG BULLY. :(

yeah.. that was really good. i totally took the time to understand that.
this is a big part of my life.
ninth sentence-

[MissWordSmith]

ok. erm. this wasn't like your usual writing. actually i must say i found this rather rude. lol.

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

Love is , indeed, ubiquitous. I imagine this to be the reason we can not escape its presence. It surrounds us like the air we breathe, yet how many people write about air? Without air (O2) we die. Without love...we die?

I love your cynicism and tongue-in-cheek humor. This is going into my library!

~True

[Sara]

lol, maybe i shouldn't comment because i write some of those goopy 'soulful' love poems myself... i'll just go now... ;)

[Gomer LePoet]

Spot on. I think I read about 98 of those this week, and 90 of the were by the same person lol.