Not Another Love Poem

A cynical jest on the ubiquity of love...

Oh, another love poem!

how new, enlightening and fresh!

thank you for sharing this with us

remind me to remember your name

so I can distinguish it from the rest.

 

So you've been let down again, have you?

how many times is that now?

it's what you feel, your emotions - oh, right

this is real, this is life - oh, of course!

Yeah, this is just what we want - and how.

 

Yes, it's all part of letting go, I know

we all can relate to it too

it's your soul down on paper - just so

is there no other side to your soul?

Look, I've better things to do, so just go.

Reviews

[heard of meese]

first sentence- is it another love poem or not? im so confused :(
second sentence- i like the word fresh. it reminds me of someone who takes showers often.
third sentence- your welcome.
fourth sentence- trisha. aka heard of meese. :)
fifth sentence- oh im sure you wont get confused. xD well i hope not :/
sixth sentence- not on tuesdays.
seventh sentence- all together? like 11.?
eigth sentence- i mean, if thats what im suppose to feel? is this suppose to all go together? i think im reading it to slow.
nitnth sentence- did you pinch yourself? maybe its a dream. :)
tenth sentence- how you know what i want. you a stalker. ha.
eleventh sentence- okay. i think i got that one.
twelvth sentence- good.
thirteeth sentence- Ahhhh get it offf!!! :o *scared*
fourteenth sentence- how many is there suppose to be?
fifteenth sentence- FINE YOU DONT GOTTA BE SO MEAN YOU BIG BULLY. :(

yeah.. that was really good. i totally took the time to understand that.
this is a big part of my life.
ninth sentence-

[mope]

I'm glad it's not just me :)

[ettorney]

LOL. So snarky. Really takes the piss.

Nice write

[Dan]

Nice Devons - I like it a lot. I will also take note to exclude any mushiness from your view in future! Just kidding - good job fella.

[A.Lee]

Finally someone said it! Love poems and break-up poems become SO repetitive its crazy. Yes, they're emotions we feel but really.... Surely there's something else in the world worth writing about. I love when people take time to write about uncommon subjects. Things that people don't normally think about. Give us insight, not mushy romance. The occasional love poem wouldn't hurt, but there are way too many. You got it spot on. Great write. They should feature this somewhere!

Let it be known, I have nothing against love poems. They are important. But the chase of love shouldn't be the only thing written about.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hah! I like this and know what you mean.. I once wrote many love poems .. well sometimes i still do lol
But yes, sometimes mine and others get old and boring...
Very 'love'ly!

lol

Chloe

[James Paulin]

I am not am expert on dry humor but this seem classic. I sometimes flirt with ubiquitous topics as a challenge like you have done so well.

[Livenrite]

Loved loved loved it! Very clever! Great piece! Thanks for sharing:)

[MattVoscinar]

I cannot tell you how much I laughed reading this.(You made me spit out my tea.)

I could not have written my thoughts on this subject any better. Excellent work.

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

100/100!! I admit I used to write cheesy love/emo poems lol but when I decided to take writing as a full hobby, I promised myself I will completely avoid those poems.

You have my full support!!

[zombiikillah666]

lol...darn..ive just been kicked in the shins. hahahaha.
i like this...you tell them love poem writers!!!
we need a revolution.!!!
heck yea..thats what im talkin bout!!!!!
whooooo!!!!!!!
i like it. (: