... wow ... that's just awesome ... for all the pink floyd addicts ... who are ... "lost souls swimming in a fish bowl" ... this is dope ... what can i say? ... "the band is just fantastic" ... "that is really what i think" ... and all of us are just ... "several species of small furry animals gathered together in a cave and grooving with a pict" ... :) ... a brilliant compilation!!! ...
This had me reaching for my iPod to see if there were any obvious ones you'd missed. See, Emily...Emily? Emily? Play damn you, play! Hmm, but was E 70-94? Shurely yes.
Oh my God I love Pink Floyd. This must be for a contest correct? I recently just reviewed a similar piece with incorporating song titles. You arranged them pretty nicely I must say.
I already wrote a long review here and wrong movement and all was gone, this windows7 is tricky! This poem makes a great feeling, I feel the music, it is a vibrant poem. Poets, painter, sculptors, require a lively acquaintance with their particular field, sort of aware connection and relationship with his idea or object to manoeuvre skillfully, to create a work of originality and this requires big talent: that's what I thought after reading this poem.
Excellent job! I've read a few of these "song title only" poems, but yours is the only one that's put together in a way that actually makes sense. I only know a few Pink Floyd songs as they're not my favorite, but even with not all of the titles being familiar it still flows well and came together nicely. I love this one. Very creative. 100% from mua.
This has a brilliant flow, taking these titles and weaving them into a coherent blend of music and lyrics. There is such powerful imagery, and you made the pieces fit just right. Excellent, powerful write!
WE BREAK ACROSS THESE TRAM LINES I DRAW
by Haz
I draw them with lines of reflections through their steps
enough space between them
for your space.. more..