Impulse

this is one of my favourite ones

immerse immutable
romeo in rainbows
rainbows, rainbows
colour brightly
immaculate imprint
a touch of a kiss
flying tenderly through the air
looking for
something
someone
you.

impassioned impact
words follow
trust, hope, care
immovable impression
la la la love song
sings softly
butterfly flutters
around buttercups
in green grass.

sun shines
desire
immaculate impulse
a hug
wrapping bodies in warmth
forever.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

This had a wonderful visual quality and flowed so perfectly. I liked the way this made me feel and see something like a star burst with incredible colors and shapes being given birth right in front of me. You words are always such a pleasure to read and this is for sure a great way to start my morning off with.


Well Done!!!!!!

[Jenny Davis]

Such beauty in your expressions and the slight alliteration simply rolls off the tongue...I would love to hear this read aloud...as this piece is perfect for that, excellent stuff :)

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is an amazing piece. I love how you wrote this. Great write!!!

Heather

[Tania Leigh]

Gary, this is excellent!

"romeo in rainbows" ..... that is fantastic, and I like the playfulness of the words through the piece...it's like they dance on the page. This one is going into my library :-)

[Rain]

You seem to always have sweetness in you poems. It seems to be your style. Associating love and romance, with buttercups and dripping nectar. I kind of like it. The sweetness of love. Rain..

[R J Askew]

Lovely stuff, very positive, optimistic. Like 'romeo in rainbows' and 'flying tenderly through the air' and the five immaculate lines. Also the .........something.............someone............. seems to stretch time as the kiss is searching. Then the 'impassioned impact' coming after the 'you' has a sort of impact feel about it. then there is more 'sound' lower down with the sibbilance taht starts with 'song sings softly' and runs through to 'sun shines'. And the last bit is tactile...in fact the last lines give the feeling of being close to a warm and friendly radiator of the emotional kind. Great stuff.

[~Wandering Soul~]

it flows great and gives off a happy feelin almost........its nice i lyk it lol
luvs xx

[Bubo]

Incredible romantic!!
Always your style with so many images and warmth............